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Challenge: Intimacy (Basic Editing)
Camera: Canon EOS-5D
Lens: Canon EF 24-105mm f/4.0L IS
Location: Johnson City, New York
Date: Mar 25, 2008
Aperture: f8.0
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/125th sec
Galleries: Portraiture, Nude
Date Uploaded: Mar 25, 2008

Shot Raw, basic raw adjustment. PS; Shadow/Hilite, converted to B&W with gradient map adjustment layer. Cut back opacity of the layer to 91%. USM heavy, then Gaussian blur heavy and faded back to about 20%. Crop and Resize.

Statistics
Place: 45 out of 117
Avg (all users): 5.4846
Avg (commenters): 5.5000
Avg (participants): 5.2391
Avg (non-participants): 5.5304
Views since voting: 5693
Views during voting: 1205
Votes: 293
Comments: 19
Favorites: 2 (view)


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/01/2008 08:44:08 PM
pose looks forced
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04/01/2008 05:30:59 AM
love how the woman is looking at the man..a very strong look, a definate connection,very nice
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03/30/2008 07:46:40 PM
Your lighting is great. The pose seems to be a bit stiff and unnatural.
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03/30/2008 06:20:23 AM
Photographically / Technically / Lighting: Outstanding. As far as "Intimacy" - I don't see it. The poses and expression looks awkward and she looks scared or concerned. Probably not what you wanted to hear, but that's just my 2 cents. Others may disagree. :)
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03/29/2008 05:52:06 PM
The shadow on his face looses it for me but it sure is intimate.
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03/29/2008 11:43:51 AM
His fist looks clutched instead of caressing... which makes me think this is not so much 'intimacy' but 'threatening'. (no points off for that, though)

I wish I could see his mouth... perhaps that would help me with the feelings.
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03/28/2008 06:07:24 PM
i see lust or fear in her eyes.. nice b&w; great image
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03/28/2008 11:24:28 AM
Nicely done.
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03/28/2008 10:55:28 AM
The models look a little tense, like they dont feel comfortable with each other. Specially her. The lighting is nice. 6
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03/27/2008 11:19:17 PM
Interesting. Beautiful body and they are close, but, in my not so humble opinion, their expressions hardly say intimacy. Seem to be leering at one another. Technically, well done. Hard to go wrong with the lady.
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03/27/2008 12:45:13 PM
Looks very posed. Her expression is not what I would view as intimate. It is more a tired look.
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03/27/2008 11:25:16 AM
Nice lighting, nice exposure great positioning. I only wish his hand looked more natural. It looks like he's trying to hold a hand grenade rather than soft flesh.
Still, I like this photo.
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03/27/2008 08:21:01 AM
I think that lady looks a bit affraid not intimate, and I think that hands with open palms works better that fists in photos like this.
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03/26/2008 03:37:54 PM
This looks really strained and uncomfortable. I would have relaxed both of their hands as they seem clenched. Her expression looks lie she is a bit nervous or not at all at ease. The lighting is nice but I might have played with mid tones a bit to bring them up a bit. ;~)
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03/26/2008 11:03:24 AM
Very good meeting of the challenge. Maybe a little too much shine on the skin, better than I could do though, but otherwise a very nice shot.
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03/26/2008 05:54:56 AM
I wish I could see more expression from the male in the picture. They eye contact for intimacy is critical and you don't see that in the photo. A good concept tho.
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03/26/2008 05:36:34 AM
Nice lighting, the mans arms looks a little awkward though. Fits the challenge nicely
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03/26/2008 01:26:02 AM
they just look really awkward in my opinion..
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03/26/2008 12:17:27 AM
This would say intimacy to me more if she didn't look so tense and uncomfortable. This makes their situation seem more out of place than intimate in my opinion.
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