Good practice rule: If you request in depth critique on your photo, you should include exposure information along with photographer comments explaining your intent and desire with the photo you have submitted. Critique club members have the option of bypassing photos that have this information excluded.
Mmmmm! Good idea. You'd benefit from a warmer light (always helps for baked goods) and maybe a shallow point of view to add depth. OK- now I have to go get a snack...