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04/02/2004 04:24:42 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club...
Hi Terje :)
I love it when I get a great image to critique from the critique club queue. This photo is underrated for sure. The problem here is that I can't really offer you any 'critique' because I wouldn't change anything about this image. Everything you have presented here simply works well as is. Maybe I can comment on some of the comments you have already received...
Beagleboy - "A bit dark, but nice concept."
I'm not sure what he means by this, but dark is the theme of the image, IMO. I think you have a perfect mixture of light and dark. The subject itself is dark, and the subtle light and shadow in the background accents that nicely.
jpochard - "I like the potential here. I'm not sure how...but I'd like to see better lighting on the figure."
It appears to me that the subject is black. No amount of light is going to change that or bring out any more detail. The subject seems 'smooth' textured and adding light won't do anything but cast unwanted shadows on your background. "brett2004" made a comment about different lighting as well. His comment mentions casting shadows on the subject, which seems quite impossible since it's black. He also mentioned the centered composition, which seems to work fine for me here as well. It's a simple preference in a photo like this, but it works in this case. Moving off center wouldn't really change a lot.
The rest of the comments you have don't seem to be complaining.
Excellent work... going on my favorites list...
John Setzler
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03/26/2004 03:10:39 PM |
| A bit dark, but nice concept. |
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03/26/2004 12:29:08 AM |
| I like the potential here. I'm not sure how...but I'd like to see better lighting on the figure. |
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03/24/2004 05:42:10 PM |
| i think this would have been more striking or powerful if you had a warm pin light illuminating the figurine and casting shadows down the curves. maybe could have been cropped a little on the right side so it wasn't so centered. this would add more interest to the figurine in my opinion. good luck! |
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03/24/2004 12:21:03 PM |
| interesting lighting and contrast |
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03/23/2004 07:19:40 PM |
| Love it! And the border too! Love the contrast! Original from the other submissions too! 10 |
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03/23/2004 03:43:57 PM |
| nice lighting. i really like the pattern on the wall. |
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03/23/2004 02:08:08 PM |
| art with a piece of art. great shot. 10 |
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03/22/2004 06:18:52 PM |
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03/22/2004 08:56:02 AM |
| Nice. I like the light rays on background. |
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03/22/2004 12:52:03 AM |
| great lighting and tones. |
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