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Bueaty Caged
Bueaty Caged
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Challenge: Parallel Lines (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Sony DSC-P7
Location: Pueblo City Zoo
Date: Mar 11, 2004
ISO: 400
Galleries: Nature, Animals
Date Uploaded: Mar 11, 2004

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Statistics
Place: 311 out of 325
Avg (all users): 3.8029
Avg (commenters): 3.3571
Avg (participants): 3.7123
Avg (non-participants): 3.9023
Views since voting: 872
Votes: 279
Comments: 15
Favorites: 0


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03/22/2004 03:21:28 PM
blury and boring
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03/22/2004 02:17:30 PM
Perhaps, railings at a Zoo are a bit too 'easy' although this is well done, with the animals blurred and the bars in sharp focus.
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03/21/2004 07:47:04 AM
is the name spelled right???
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03/20/2004 08:44:15 AM
I understand the point of putting the focal point on the wire to emphasise your 'caged' meaning, but I feel that it might have been more visually appealing the other way around.
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03/19/2004 04:29:31 PM
I love the concept here. I'm not sure if this was originally a lot bigger and you cropped a small piece of the image or not. It's a bit grainy with lots of image noise. It also somehow doesn't seem as in focus as it could be (not as sharp). I know the parallel lines are supposed to be the main subject, but I almost feel liek I want to see more detail of the deer in behind as well. You may be able to address this next time by playing around with depth of field. However, I really like that you did something unique and original. Good luck!
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03/19/2004 07:17:44 AM
Bet your kicking yourself for mis-spelling beauty.
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03/18/2004 11:39:22 PM
Too blurry, too noisy. Choose what to focus on, the bars or the animal, but not both. Don't crop it too much so that you get too blurry.
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03/18/2004 10:55:47 AM
A little fuzzy. The spelling, too.
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03/17/2004 07:45:43 PM
a little out of focus
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03/17/2004 11:50:55 AM
Your composition is good.
The overall focus is poor, even though your tried to focus in on the parallel lines.
I would like to see the focus reversed here (on the deer) since you call attention to beauty in your title.
The picture could be bigger overall.
Misspelled title, probably a typo you didn't catch before submittal.
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03/17/2004 11:40:30 AM
Very well framed and composed. May have increased the focus on the deer a bit more to have the parallel lines of the cage 'highlight' the situation rather than 'dominate', but the idea comes through clearly.
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03/17/2004 11:23:58 AM
Whoops spelling. :(
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03/17/2004 08:39:57 AM
A bit blurry for me.
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03/17/2004 08:13:24 AM
Neither the fence nor the animal is in focus
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03/17/2004 05:58:41 AM
Is the spelling of beauty wrong because it's an ugly animal?
Photo loos almost "foggy"
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