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Challenge: Off-Screen Expectation (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Olympus C-730UZ
Location: Beach Strip, Hamilton, Ontario, Canada
Date: Mar 7, 2004
Aperture: 3.4
ISO: 64
Shutter: 1/60
Galleries: Snapshot, Animals
Date Uploaded: Mar 7, 2004

Dog sitting on the trail by the beach looking at the beach and lake. I think that he was thirsty.

Statistics
Place: 143 out of 183
Avg (all users): 4.1815
Avg (commenters): 5.0000
Avg (participants): 4.0488
Avg (non-participants): 4.2394
Views since voting: 887
Votes: 270
Comments: 14
Favorites: 0


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
03/14/2004 08:35:53 PM
the angle of the street works well, I think it would've been better with the sticks cropped out of the top
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03/14/2004 04:29:27 PM
one of the better dog photos...at least your dog appears to be looking at something...good composition...maybe could have edited out the leash
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03/14/2004 10:26:19 AM
There is too much empty space around your dog. to make this an interesting photo. Consider taking the photo much closer to add interest.
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03/12/2004 03:56:44 PM
Excellent shot. Maybe too centered. I would have liked to have seen a different angle that included part of the dogs face.
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03/12/2004 12:31:00 PM
I really like how the leash leading to the right and the dog looking straight ahead create two points of interest off-screen. It's such a calm picture but there's clearly conflict. :) Technically, it's not very interesting, but I rated it high because I really am curious what is off-screen in two directions!
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03/12/2004 07:44:34 AM
Good theme interpretation. Too bad the leash is in the shot. It is a disctraction. But you know the dog is looking at a squirrel or something.
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03/11/2004 09:54:23 PM
Nice perspective. I wish the dog were centered, though, instead of just barely off. The contrast is a little flat.
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03/11/2004 11:52:53 AM
i like the idea but i would like to see you come in closer to elminate the mundane street and grass. This would be nice in black and white with the contrast levels upped a bit.
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03/11/2004 08:53:36 AM
More colorsaturation maybe or how would B/W with more contrast look like? Cant say it fires up my imagination about whats happening of-screen.
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03/11/2004 07:46:53 AM
The dog looks like its swinging a golf club! LOL
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03/11/2004 06:59:43 AM
Quite a fresh idea here in this image..but for me the angle of view needs altered to make the effect stronger.
The dog is your subject and I would have preferred to see it fill most of the frame and probably taken from the left side and a little to the rear. This would have eliminated all the unnecessary clutter but kept the interesting angle of view. A shallow depth of field would help too.
Hope this is helpful.
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03/10/2004 07:19:43 PM
good focus but uninteresting
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03/10/2004 05:50:36 PM
Sorry, but there isn't much "off screen expectation". Maybe a view of the side of the dogs head with a focused glance on his/her face would better convey the message. The colors are pretty bland as well. I think the dog could have made a good subject, but the presentation here is lacking.
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03/10/2004 05:22:29 PM
nice picture. after the challenge, you may want to consider cloning aut the leash, or whatever it is.
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