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01/29/2008 07:14:34 PM |
the focus is off and the image seems blurry. |
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01/29/2008 04:00:54 PM |
The lack of focus really hurt a great idea. |
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01/29/2008 09:01:35 AM |
Very blurry, and very dull, the colors are bland and there really isn't anything that pops. Maybe you could try another angle. |
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01/28/2008 03:38:36 PM |
I wish I could give you a higher score because your subject is a nice childhood memory for many people. Unfortunately the focus is not up to par. The lighting is ok. There are several thing, IMO, that could have made this a good shot besides the technical flaws. One being a little more creative in composition while trying to make the lunch box (bucket) more of a memory instead of a snapshot. A creative title could have helped.
I no where as good as the majority of the photographers here but if my comment helps in any way and you would like some input let me know. I will do my best.
I wish you the best in this challenge and future ones as well. |
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01/28/2008 01:50:08 PM |
Ah, this would have been perfect without the slight blurr. |
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01/28/2008 08:48:39 AM |
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01/27/2008 02:10:30 PM |
At least +1 for the object - obviously the kiddos haven't played with this a lot. |
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01/26/2008 07:08:50 PM |
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01/26/2008 12:44:07 PM |
OOF and background is pretty boring (gray carpet?) |
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01/26/2008 01:56:48 AM |
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01/26/2008 01:10:15 AM |
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01/25/2008 01:35:59 PM |
The bucket is a bit blurry/out of focus. Sometimes some cameras have problems focusing on reflecting objects... you need to focus manually or focusing on an object at the same distance (to the bucket in this case).
After writing the above i've seen your EXIF... Exposed Time = 1/8 seconds, did you used tripod? If not this exaplains the blurry image.
Gave you a 5. |
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01/25/2008 08:56:25 AM |
Harsh lighting giving burnt out specular highlights, distracting textured surface and generally suffering from what appears to be camera shake. A tripod in these lighting conditions is definately a must |
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01/25/2008 12:27:58 AM |
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01/24/2008 04:41:57 PM |
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01/24/2008 02:12:57 PM |
This shot is out of focus. you problably know that by now though |
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01/24/2008 11:13:45 AM |
This is out of focus I believe. Nice lunch box though |
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01/23/2008 09:23:48 PM |
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01/23/2008 07:40:08 PM |
wish that the lunch bucket was more in focus. |
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01/23/2008 05:54:55 PM |
Subject could be off center. Needs to be sharper. Lighting is flat. |
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01/23/2008 05:11:50 PM |
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01/23/2008 02:26:17 PM |
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01/23/2008 01:35:34 PM |
Ahhhh what are you focused on??? |
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01/23/2008 10:51:48 AM |
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01/23/2008 10:43:47 AM |
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01/23/2008 10:16:50 AM |
Super cool lunch box, maybe it is my eyes, but it seems very out of focus |
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01/23/2008 10:15:03 AM |
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01/23/2008 09:50:04 AM |
More focus would have made this better, I think. |
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01/23/2008 06:30:30 AM |
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01/23/2008 06:21:23 AM |
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01/23/2008 02:32:59 AM |
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01/23/2008 01:53:35 AM |
excellent artifact! I think a more dynamic point of view would help this shot. Plus, this is a little out of focus (OOF) |
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01/23/2008 01:41:32 AM |
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