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01/14/2008 11:12:24 AM |
| Thanks for the competition Jaime. You can see the pattern of flight which is pretty cool. Unique idea for the challenge! |
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01/13/2008 06:37:09 PM |
| guessing the first or last 7 were taken and then she stepped in for the final or first shot? |
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01/13/2008 05:30:26 AM |
| Unique Idea, but lacking a little where the focus of this photo should be. |
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01/11/2008 09:00:57 AM |
| Beautiful cloudless sky. As you might have heard before, the horizon isn't quite straight. Very crisp. |
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01/10/2008 10:30:08 PM |
| cool looking kite? beautiful sky and lots of open space. nice job catching the kite in all the different places. |
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01/10/2008 12:59:48 PM |
| Not very interesting but meets the challenge. |
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01/08/2008 10:27:15 PM |
| Haha... looks like several giant ladybugs are attacking him. |
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01/08/2008 01:19:13 PM |
| Nice shot. Nice place. There's something too random about the scattering of kites. Doesn't give a sense of movement... |
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01/08/2008 01:44:01 AM |
| you should take this a step further and change the clothing to make the colors pop. the curiosity factor would be accentuated by also having a curious human subject. |
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01/07/2008 11:49:03 PM |
| Cool idea. I like the idea, good use of negative space. |
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01/07/2008 09:52:49 PM |
| I think if you would have had the flyer in different crazy positions rather than the kite, it would be a bit more interesting. Looks kind of like floating pop cans! |
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01/07/2008 07:16:07 PM |
GeneralE: this is more complex than the single swing of a golfer.
ursula: yes, but it's still one lovely line of motion.
GeneralE: but it intersects itself, cuts itself in two.
ursula: but by the time it gets to itself, it's not there anymore.
GeneralE: clearly you know nothing about topology.
scalvert: the photograph incriminates itself. Clearly there is someone flying this kite. That person is using muscles, will, thought, etc. to effect the flight pattern of the kite. It's not natural.
ursula: It's the wind. The wind is natural. She's just holding it to create the proper tension to allow the wind to work on it.
scalvert: but that's an unnatural method for portraying natural phenomena.
ursula: so is pohtography. |
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01/07/2008 06:54:40 PM |
| The kite is so small the effect is really wasted. Some movement on the part of the kite flyer would strengthen this shot. |
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01/07/2008 12:57:44 PM |
| Nice take on the challenge, I like to see something different. |
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01/07/2008 12:09:06 PM |
| That is pretty cool. I bet the kite is tough to fly on really windy days! It looks like the horizon is severely crooked. Maybe just an illusion or a sloped beach, but it distracts my eyes from the kite. 6. |
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01/07/2008 11:12:53 AM |
| Cool. It almost looks like juggling. |
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01/07/2008 09:44:43 AM |
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01/07/2008 07:01:47 AM |
| Your series of joined photos makes visual sense. I'm not a fan of most of the time lapse shots in this challenge, but yours does work for me. 7. |
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01/07/2008 03:41:55 AM |
The kites should be the main point of interest here, instead my eye is continually drawn to the person, could probably do with thinking a little more about how you have composed the image.
Also check the horizon is straight. |
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