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Making my point
Making my point
apashack


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Challenge: Time Lapse (Advanced Editing VI ("Time Lapse")*)
Camera: Canon EOS-20D
Location: My Living room
Date: Jan 4, 2008
Aperture: f/18
ISO: 100
Shutter: 23 Sec
Galleries: Action, Studio
Date Uploaded: Jan 3, 2008

I thought about this shot for a while. Had to read the rules several times and go to the forums for advice. I hope this one rates. It was my first attempt at this type of photography.

Black backdrop. Used Bulb and flashed from the sides 3 times. I wanted more but 3 was all I could get from my wrist. (I need to flex more I guess)
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Statistics
Place: 63 out of 84
Avg (all users): 5.3029
Avg (commenters): 5.5000
Avg (participants): 5.2034
Avg (non-participants): 5.3266
Views since voting: 962
Views during voting: 713
Votes: 307
Comments: 21
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
01/13/2008 10:42:32 PM
Cool idea, nice composition, I would have liked to see a little more light on the pistol.
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01/13/2008 06:33:44 PM
really don't see the gun very well. maybe more lighting on the gun
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01/13/2008 02:08:19 PM
Good idea for a photo and the lightning(?) on the shirt adds to the photo, and helps lead the eye to the gun. I find the gun quite hard to see though against the black background. good shot :).
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01/11/2008 04:37:57 PM
Great work....wish you had actually fired it in the first photo.
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01/11/2008 12:41:00 PM
If thats how you make your point, I hope to never argue with you! :)
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01/11/2008 08:54:32 AM
Perhaps a bit too dark. The pistol is barely discernable from the BG. Yes, it might be my monitor, but all of the colors look spot on.
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01/10/2008 01:41:12 PM
Point made. Shows the motion nicely. Good lighting.
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01/10/2008 12:49:15 PM
too dark and busy 5
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01/10/2008 10:47:08 AM
I can already smell the ones... ;-)

While I do not condemn the use of weapons or violence in pictures as a matter of principle (and even really like some of the entries of that kind, 606150 or 582516, for example), I feel that displaying a gun the way you did is not really a suitable idea for this challenge. I can think of various ideas to use a gun in a clever way for this challenge (something like this 614672 in time lapse. Or a duell scene. Or ...), but this is not one of them. It's just boring. You could have taken the same picture with any other object and it would be equally boring. It pales in comparison to all the sports shots in this challenge. So: 3.
01/09/2008 07:18:20 PM
where's the muzzle flash?
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01/09/2008 02:54:35 PM
i like the movement. the gun is almost invisible against the background, though.
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01/08/2008 04:04:29 PM
Cool shot, I wish we had a little more focus on the lighting on the shirt, it is kind of distracting. Good work.
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01/08/2008 01:11:55 PM
Shouldn't judge on content, but it sort of makes its point...
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01/07/2008 07:12:04 PM
karmabreeze: this is definitely natural motion. It is the triggering of a massive karmic wheel.

scalvert: the finger is relaxed on the trigger. Therefore the motion is not due to Newtonian's Law of Equal and Opposite Motion, but rather a simple flexing of the wrist muscle. It is not natural motion.

ursula: This is a staged shot with motion planned by the photographer. Therefore it is not natural.

sher: But people are natural. Thought is natural. If this person thought to jerk his wrist upward, then that is as natural as a leaf falling.

scalvert: don't be ridiculous. It's obvious that premeditated acts of will are not natural.

muckpond: he's taking somebody out. That's totally natural!

scalvert: but it's staged.

muckpond: all your shots are staged.

scalvert: yes but never in a challenge that demanded natural motion.

muckpond: what do you mean? your shot in THIS CHALLENGE is staged.

scalvert: yes, but it is a staged occurence of natural motion. I have certifications from three independent physicists.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
01/07/2008 06:55:48 PM
Almost went for the gun shot myself. Have to say I'm glad I didn't.
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01/07/2008 01:09:04 PM
I think my favorite thing is the lightning bolt jitters on your shirt, I am glad you left it in. You seem to have lost some detail in the gun.
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01/07/2008 09:59:14 AM
This one doesn't work for me... Firearms can always make interesting subjects, but the background and the handgun aren't set far enough apart. I would have used a chromed pistol, or I would have gone with a white background.

The white trim in the sleeve is also a distraction for me... It gives off a neat lightning bolt effect, but that doesn't aide the image at all.
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01/07/2008 09:55:26 AM
You lost some detial in the gun during the shifting. Ohterwise this would have been ga great capture.
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01/07/2008 09:17:29 AM
Wow, I wish I could see the bullets actually coming out of the gun. That would be really cool. Nice job!
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01/07/2008 03:56:13 AM
The most striking element here is the little triangle of hand which is brightest. This attracts the eye all the time. Its only after a while do you notice the gun. Could do with reworking using a different lighting setup and toning down the hand in PP.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
01/07/2008 12:59:28 AM
Need a little more light on the gun to separate it from the background.
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