Colorful, interesting abstract. The positions of the straws give some depth to the photo. Only nit pick, I would have cloned oth the hair on the green straw.
One shot in this challenge has a similar subject, drinking straws. I must say that I like the other one better than this one, although this one is good. There is however a bit of distortion, or fuzziness that doesnt do it well.
Simple idea made into a first class image by great use of colour and composition. One small niggle is that it`s too big for my screen and I have to scroll up and down to see the full picture. :)
Good work.
Your pinks are a little too much, and your other colors seem a little dull. I don't know exactly how to fix this one but I would start out playing with the levels some more...
TC