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10/23/2007 08:31:41 PM |
I love, love, love the hammer motion here. Superb tones and texture. I find the pencil a bit too hot, though. |
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10/23/2007 08:26:44 PM |
Details on the pencil seem a little over exposed, otherwise a good one. |
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10/23/2007 06:48:24 PM |
Nice action on the hammer it leads you to the subject in one fluid motion. Nice creativity and execution with this shot. I'll offer one thing for you to consider, the lighting is a little harsh on the pencil. That being said the overall lighting is well done and suits the shot nicely. |
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10/23/2007 06:14:27 PM |
Love the concept and nicely executed with the hammer but it's to bad the pencil is so blown out...
TC |
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10/23/2007 01:43:46 PM |
Works well, love the motion
Good luck
Kev |
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10/20/2007 02:08:51 PM |
Nice idea & the hammer portion looks great. Wish pencil itself weren't so blown out. |
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10/20/2007 12:07:14 PM |
The long exposure makes an interesting picture with the hammer but the light on the pencil brings the pic down.. |
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10/20/2007 11:40:22 AM |
underexposed hammer - over exposed pencil. could of been MUCH better 5 |
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10/20/2007 03:57:40 AM |
Good thing this pencil has a silencer on it for late night use in photo shoots. Love the multiplicity of the hammer. |
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10/19/2007 10:35:59 AM |
wow, I like how the different stages of the hammer falling are shown and the title is so fitting! |
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10/18/2007 11:39:00 PM |
you used 3 flashes for this shot which was good to create a movement for the hamer but your pencil is very "hot" as a result... |
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10/18/2007 05:12:20 PM |
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10/18/2007 12:48:48 PM |
The lighting on the pencil is very harsh! Which is a shame as you got a lovely "trail" of the movement of the hammer! Nice try and good luck |
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10/18/2007 11:49:33 AM |
the lighting on the pencil is a bit harsh, but I really like the motion in the hammer. |
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10/17/2007 11:21:49 PM |
the lighting is a litte strong on the pencil iteself, to me, but a good creative idea and a nice change of pace from chopsticks. |
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10/17/2007 04:37:37 PM |
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10/17/2007 02:07:33 PM |
I like your idea and composition, pencil is a bit blown |
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10/17/2007 01:26:13 PM |
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10/17/2007 10:37:40 AM |
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10/17/2007 10:20:31 AM |
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10/17/2007 06:47:13 AM |
nice effort to show 'motion' but the pencil is blown out and seems oversharpened |
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10/17/2007 05:36:53 AM |
The highlights on the pencil look a little too burn out but i do like the movement in the hammer. |
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10/17/2007 04:35:23 AM |
Driving home my point? I don't get it. The highlight is clipped. |
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10/17/2007 02:17:46 AM |
The pencil is really blown out and the bits (is that what those are?) are really too dark. Try making some adjustments to the photo so I can make out the details. |
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10/17/2007 12:20:07 AM |
nice shot. The pencil is a little bright though |
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