can't tell what that stuff in the upper right is, if it's not important to the picture a step or two to the right would have given you an angle without it
It´s like my first idea to this challenge. Good shot. I think you can improve the capture angle. It´s almost a silhouette. A bit more dark or light will be good. The mid tone almost black lead me to think that it was a lack.
Interesting idea, nice shot. It would have been interesting to use a different apperture to enhance the subject and blur the background, which is distracting because of all the elements in it.