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Could you get that for me?
Could you get that for me?
Albertmdh


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Letting Go (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Olympus C-740UZ
Location: in my computer room, VA.
Date: Feb 8, 2004
Aperture: F8.0
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/30 sec
Date Uploaded: Feb 8, 2004

whoops... i dropped my pen... can you get that for me?

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Place: 185 out of 188
Avg (all users): 3.5212
Avg (commenters): 3.0000
Avg (participants): 3.3883
Avg (non-participants): 3.6090
Views since voting: 847
Votes: 259
Comments: 14
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02/18/2004 02:35:18 AM
what is the difference between my comment

"Good Idea, but the shadow on the white paper is a dead give away and detracts from the image it could have been."

And

"move your subjects away from the background."

which was maked as Photographer found comment helpful. ????
 Comments Made During the Challenge
02/17/2004 08:06:51 AM
Was the idea to create an image of the hand leaving the pen? IMO, the pen and hand look as if they are placed on a surface. The peon or the hand should have given a feeling of motion.

The pen seems to be out of focus.
02/14/2004 10:54:21 PM
this image seems overexposed and lacks quality... perhaps too much jpeg compression did that? technically it could've looked better if it was closer to 150K allowed here... the subject and composition don't present any interest to me either... as far as interpretation of the challenge is concerned, it looks to me like the hand and the pen are just resting on the flat surface, that's all...
02/14/2004 08:42:58 PM
Interesting idea, but the choice of lighting and background makes the shot quite flat. It lacks movement.
02/13/2004 02:06:32 AM
didn't read the instructions did we?
02/12/2004 02:15:06 PM
Please choose 1:
A. A different coloured pen would contrast better with the background.
B. A different coloured background would contrast better with the pen.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
02/12/2004 06:53:23 AM
Good Idea, but the shadow on the white paper is a dead give away and detracts from the image it could have been.
02/11/2004 11:43:18 PM
If you are not actually going to drop it, and just lie it on the table, at least make sure the shadows are not so prominent. (or if you actually DID drop it, move further from a wall, because it takes from the value of the picture) =)
02/11/2004 08:56:12 PM
Focus could be stronger.
02/11/2004 04:30:17 PM
move your subjects away from the background.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
02/11/2004 02:31:00 PM
its really really white and too bright.
02/11/2004 01:08:35 PM
would be better with a background
02/11/2004 12:35:37 PM
white pen on white background doesn't work for me, focus could be sharper
  Photographer found comment helpful.
02/11/2004 08:28:11 AM
This remember my old Cannon Prima Quick a P&S film camera. Use the light to add to the image, not to blow it.


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