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Perth: City of Lights
Perth: City of Lights
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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Free Study 2007-04 (Expert Editing*)
Camera: Sony DSLR-A100
Lens: Sony DT 18-70mm f/3.5-5.6 Aspherical ED Zoom Lens for Sony Alpha
Location: Kings Park Western Australia
Date: Apr 18, 2007
Aperture: F3.5
ISO: 100
Shutter: 15sec
Galleries: Cityscape, Urban
Date Uploaded: Apr 30, 2007

Taken from Kings Park while showing signal2noise around my town.

Converted from .ARW to .TIF and transferred to PS. Rotated 1 degree CW, cropped, brightened using levels, converted to 8 bits per channel, noise ninja run twice, cloned out some light artifacts in the sky, resized with several step downs, unsharp mask applied twice, first at 50% 0.9 then 30% 0.6, added black border, saved for web.

Statistics
Place: 313 out of 573
Avg (all users): 5.6141
Avg (commenters): 5.0000
Avg (participants): 5.4688
Avg (non-participants): 5.9464
Views since voting: 1016
Views during voting: 221
Votes: 184
Comments: 10
Favorites: 0


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11/17/2008 11:28:37 AM
I like this cityscape a lot better than the other one I commented on. The wide ratio works well here. I think it may be a tad bright so perhaps a higher f-stop (also would have yielded those cool stars from the lamps). Nicely done.
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10/10/2007 10:00:42 PM
Very nice night shot - I like the overall comp and golden tones. Nice capture.
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06/24/2007 07:37:25 AM
I lived in Western Australia for 25 years and love Perth, especially Kings Park..... I feel the over brightness let you down on this one, but gee you have brought back some special memories for me.....
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06/21/2007 08:53:38 AM
Fantastic Shot. I cant do this one in Adelaide because we are 30 years behind and don't have freeways near our city. Great Capture.
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05/09/2007 10:52:21 AM
Greetings from the Critique Club

Oh, Perth! If I ever get back to Australia, that is very high on my 'list' along with the rest of Western Australia.

You've given us a good look at the present-day skyline of this beautiful city. As your other commenters have noted, this image is well composed but is a bit 'hot'. Melethia has given you some excellent pointers on how to correct that, and I'll give you one more: Bracket your shots. On a night shot like this, you used a tripod. When it's all set up, it's a matter of a few tweaks of the camera settings to change the aperature/shutter speed. Then you can select the best exposure later on. Then, in RAW, you can change the exposure setting as well. Experiment! It's fun to play - with a copy of your original, of course.
:-))

I'll look forward to seeing more of your photography from this beautiful place.
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05/08/2007 04:37:03 PM
This is a beautiful view! I saw in the Under 5 thread that you mentioned it was a bit bright and you didn't know how to fix it. One way (the best way) is to underexpose to begin with. When shooting night shots, I've found you have to shoot at less than what the camera tells you. Here you shot at 15 seconds. In this same situation, try 10 seconds, maybe even 5.

In post processing, you can try reducing exposure, or using a duplicate layer with a blending mode set to multiply.

If none of this makes sense, send me a PM and I'll try to explain further. And congrats on a new personal best!
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/02/2007 05:07:24 PM
bright!
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05/02/2007 09:46:40 AM
Great night photo. Nice job.
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05/01/2007 10:08:48 PM
Seems a bit over-exposed.
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05/01/2007 03:41:55 PM
Well composed, some of the highlights are a little harsh.
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