Nice focus and nice work meeting the challenge, but this one is a bit too busy. With all the business, there is no defined subject to grab the eye and pull it into the image. It also feels cramped with the to individuals' feet touching the bottom of the frame.
Whilst this is a photo of a street scene, it doesn't draw me in and ask questions about the lives of those depicted. The scene is very busy, and it is hard to make out details - I feel that it would have been more beneficial to centre in on just one of the groups of people.
looks like there was a lot going on here, I would have liked to see a bit more detail. Next time have a go at getting a bit closer. It's not that scary once you get started! If your not too happy pointing your camera at strangers try shooting from the hip. Good luck!
too wide to really have a focal point. It would be nice if you could be in the crowd or at least have a main subject in mind for the view to focus on. Your distance has also kept anything from being in focus (or it could be compressed to the point of distorting the image when saved).