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08/26/2002 02:03:00 AM |
| Explanation: The pencil is "just there" (broken by the bulldozer....not really). I thought the roots and the live trees would make more of a message. I wasn't going for anything with the pencil specifically. It was just in the way of the "modernization" caused by the bulldozer, just as the trees are/were. Thanks to those who tried to figure it out though ; ) |
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08/26/2002 12:24:00 AM |
| Well.....I liked it anyway |
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08/22/2002 02:17:00 PM |
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08/22/2002 11:37:00 AM |
| I see the pencil... I'm not sure I understand the 'message' though... I understand the 'modernization' theme with the bulldozer making way for new things, but I'm lost on how the pencil fits in here... Maybe I'm just trying to figure out something that isn't there :) - jmsetzler |
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08/21/2002 12:38:00 PM |
| There is definately a pencil here. I'm not sure I understand, but I think it has something to do with how something used to be done, and how it's done now. In my opinion, it's not very visually appealing, however, my son loved the "big truck". Setting all that aside...The lighting is good, and the angle on the dirt is good. I wish we could see more of the bull dozer. Good luck with the challenge. |
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08/21/2002 09:50:00 AM |
| you definitely met the challenge, and you've used the selective DOF quite well, but - to me - the picture has very little appeal, sorry. also, i guess i don't quite get the title. the modernization probably relates to the heavy machinery and the pile of rubble. if you mean modernization from using old-fashioned pens, there's no link to what we are moving to. -- gr8photos (3) |
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08/21/2002 03:38:00 AM |
| I'm sorry, it doesn't appeal to me. Nice clean shot though. |
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08/20/2002 09:50:00 AM |
| Lighting is good on this shot. It seems to be a bit out of focus though. |
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08/20/2002 09:11:00 AM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background9,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing6,
Challenge: Does your entry meet it?10,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 5,
Total Averaged Rating8. Autool
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08/20/2002 06:49:00 AM |
This is an interesting idea and the light on the pencil and rubble is good. I like the green colour and light reflected there but the tractor thing seems too much in shadow. I think though this is interesting idea, the photo doesn't grab me visually.
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08/19/2002 05:35:00 AM |
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