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01/17/2007 12:34:46 AM |
| Thanks for all the great comments! I'm really surprised nobody mentioned the blurred DPChallenge front page on the laptop in the background. Regrettably I did over-sharpen this one and didn't notice the halo's until after the submission deadline. |
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01/16/2007 11:19:43 PM |
| Great job... Nicely composed & processed. << 8 >> |
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01/14/2007 10:42:14 PM |
| I like what I like and I like this one. I can't break it down beyond the fact that it has a certain 'editorial' quality to it. And I just really like it. I ranked this way up. Good luck. Great photo. |
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01/12/2007 11:31:36 AM |
| I like it, but a bit oversharpened. |
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01/11/2007 04:09:09 PM |
| The subject has good tone and contrast to pull him out of the background. |
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01/11/2007 02:59:30 PM |
| I very much like the idea. A laptop on the background and a person that is looking away wearing a geek-sign: all very complementary elements. To me personally i feel you could have maybe placed them better. He looks away from us, which fits the geek part, but he also looks away from the laptop, which doesn't fit. Maybe placing the laptop to the left of him (from our point of view) would fit more in the story. vote=6 |
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01/11/2007 01:25:17 PM |
| Great composition & execution!! 10! |
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01/10/2007 08:08:06 PM |
| Nice :) You might get "the subject is going out of the frame" comments, but I think it totally works here. A great example of when breaking the rules works. 9. |
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01/10/2007 03:01:01 PM |
| Interesting arrangement and above average B&W conversion, but a little weak on image appeal. Personally, I prefer to have the subject looking into the frame rather than drawing the eye out of the photo. Those two sparkles on the front edge of the laptop certainly could have been cloned out in Advanced editing, too. Nice use of DOF. |
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01/10/2007 07:09:27 AM |
gets better and better the more i look at this one ... about the 5th time thats happened while voting on this challenge ...
this is an excellent photograph .. love all the different types of contrasts going on ... =8 |
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01/10/2007 01:17:05 AM |
| See the white line that separates his sleeve from his arm, or his shirt from his chest? These "halos" are caused by too much sharpening. It's also evident (but harder to explain) in his beard and even in the letters on his hat). Anyway, the main thing is ... sharpen the image, but don't over sharpen it. |
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