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12/30/2006 07:51:16 PM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: Nice focus and a very nice job only focusing on the elements of the image. The use of the sheet was a very nice touch to prevent any sort of distractions in the background. I also see some sort of yellow hue to the image. I think increasing the skin tones was unnecessary for this capture. It look over-warmed as it is. I'd be really interested in seeing the original.
Lighting: I like the lighting you used here. You did a good job creating highlights and shadows that give a nice depth to the image.
Composition/Content: While I do not usually withhold points for borders, this one is far too distracting. You have great content for this challenge that is nicely composed. The border is far too strong for the tones inside the frame, thus it competes strongly for the eye's attention.
My Opinion: First-rate job meeting the challenge, but I'd be willing to bet the border and the hue/sat on the skin tones kept this one out of the 6 range.
Eric
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12/24/2006 12:53:24 PM |
I should know what it is she's eating, but my eyes are telling me it looks like something else.
Gotta go get a bag now... |
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12/23/2006 03:47:01 PM |
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12/22/2006 04:58:17 PM |
| This one reminds me a little of Lucy on the convyor belt stuffing chocolates in her mouth LOL |
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12/22/2006 02:51:17 PM |
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12/22/2006 12:41:45 PM |
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12/21/2006 11:57:51 PM |
| I like the effort here. A small shift in color balance could do a great deal for this - less yellow - The colored border draws the eye to these colors too and i think it's just not appealing with the food for some reason. |
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12/20/2006 12:46:42 PM |
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12/19/2006 07:57:07 AM |
| rofl! Thanks for the laugh on this - what a mess too!!! |
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12/19/2006 03:09:01 AM |
| So messy, and hate to clean it up, but very good idea..... |
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12/18/2006 09:51:17 AM |
| Uggh.. now this is dedication: well done. Must have resulted in an excellent facial scrub and you must be glowing with health! :) |
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12/18/2006 09:38:33 AM |
| The lighting looks to harsh on the face and on the hand. I also don't care for the heavy gold boarder. Definatly meets challange and I would not want to have to clean that up!! |
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12/18/2006 06:31:54 AM |
| That's pretty damn sticky! |
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12/18/2006 04:54:23 AM |
| OMG!! What a mess!! ROFLMAO!! |
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12/18/2006 02:36:19 AM |
| Good concept. Could use some better lighting. |
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12/18/2006 12:49:54 AM |
| ROFL Great title. What a mess!!! YUCK |
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12/18/2006 12:17:52 AM |
| pershaps a bit hungry? good fun shot...well done |
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