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It's honey , honey
It's honey , honey
clangley50


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Sticky (Advanced Editing V)
Camera: Canon EOS-5D
Lens: Canon EF 300mm f/4.0L IS USM
Location: inside house afternoon light through window
Date: Dec 17, 2006
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: 640
Shutter: 1/320
Galleries: Food and Drink, DPChallenge GTGs
Date Uploaded: Dec 17, 2006

My wife (the model) said she couldn't tell it was honey, hence the title.
crop levels colors noise sharpen
just learning raw and cs2 I usually do too much any suggestions welcome

Statistics
Place: 55 out of 100
Avg (all users): 5.4246
Avg (commenters): 6.5000
Avg (participants): 5.1509
Avg (non-participants): 5.5397
Views since voting: 1143
Views during voting: 443
Votes: 179
Comments: 10
Favorites: 0


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05/22/2007 10:13:32 AM
aka - The Start of a Very Sticky Situation... :)
12/30/2006 04:46:27 PM
Hey there from the Critique Club

Camera Work/Technical: Very clean, crisp focus, as well as a great depth of field. Also, your choice of white balance created very nice, warm tones providing a very inviting feeling to the image.

Lighting: I'd really like to see more light on the side of her face that is toward the camera. While the shadows fit nicely into this image, this part of her face is a bit too dark, thus pulling and holding the viewer's eye into the dark void.

Composition/Content: I agree that this one needed a tongue, but I also think some nose should have been included. Without the nose, the faces looks like it has some sort of uncomfortable deformity. This one was not far off the first place finisher. I even like your tones better, but you needed that nose.

My Opinion: I think the concept is far batter than the score it pulled, but it suffered in its execution. This really wasn't far from being a personal best. In my opinion, it only needed a nose and a little less shadow.

Eric
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/23/2006 04:22:46 PM
Would make more sense to me with the tongue sticking out to catch the honey.
12/20/2006 10:10:36 AM
very sexy
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12/18/2006 08:31:01 AM
Very provocative shot. I think this one could go either way ultimately, low or high end. I think the tounge should have been shown a little more. I do like the lighting though.
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12/18/2006 06:24:15 AM
Very sexy.
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12/18/2006 05:05:50 AM
Good work. I like the detail on the teeth.
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12/18/2006 01:05:48 AM
say ahhh. nice lighting and clarity.
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12/18/2006 12:25:15 AM
hmm... makes me want to go out and buy some honey...
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12/18/2006 12:14:43 AM
good idea, but I just saw a better version of this...good lighting but it seems out of focus where it matters
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