Very nice portrait, you really captured the warmth and joy of your subject. Well done! There doesn't seem to be enough of that ribbon showing to add to the photo, instead it draws the eye out of the frame some.
Terrific portrait...model looks comfortable and relaxed, sharpness and clarity are great, and the processing works well for the image. Wish the eyes were a tiny bit brighter. Great job!! :)
good portrait shot, great colour in her eyes. Leaving in part of the hair clip is a little distracting though. i would have left it completley out or included the whole thing myself.
Good portrait. Your model looks natural and relaxed and that always, helps, I think. It is a bit bright, but I have a really bright monitor, so that may be part of it.
another victim of the rule of thirds. *feel* your composition. I'm not feeling this one. I like the model, though. She seems like a real person, and is expressive. 6