You were going for an "old timey" feel with the sepia tones, but it looks more than a bit washed out. Its also a cool looking train, and the shot exudes traininess - can't get trainer than a train - but the head-on composition just doesn't do it for me.
Agreed! However, IMHO the brightness could be less for more punch! Yet, if you were going for that ancient, fading, deteriorating photo "feel", then...you NAILED it! :)