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08/20/2006 08:19:23 PMPost actions
nice composition, but could use some more saturation and contrast. great idea, too.
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08/20/2006 08:06:06 PMPost actions
Nice idea, but what are those white parts at the bottom? Fingers?
08/20/2006 02:08:48 AMPost actions
I don't understand the glove.
08/16/2006 02:38:53 PMPost actions
The color is not right. Could use more contrast.
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08/15/2006 08:58:08 PMPost actions
I think it would look better if the peas were a brighter color. the finer tips don't add much for me. perhaps if we saw more of the hand.
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08/15/2006 05:44:58 PMPost actions
I bet that was real fiddly to make! :D Ok, the issues I see in this image are two-fold: 1. The focus seems to be on the top left of your model's neck but and a bit soft on the necklace - would be better the other way round; 2. The fingers(?) are distracting. Not sure they're there to hold it together, but I feel it's an enormous let down in the composition.
Good effort and creativity though, keep trying! :)
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08/15/2006 04:18:49 PMPost actions
Nice idea but poor lighting, poor focus, uninspiring composition and rather insipid colours.
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08/15/2006 03:34:07 PMPost actions
Nice idea, color and lighting could be improved.
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08/15/2006 11:40:44 AMPost actions
a little too soft and flat clor on the peas. Gloved fingers don't look right. the gloves look more like winter gloves than formal gloves.
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08/15/2006 06:07:06 AMPost actions
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08/15/2006 12:34:42 AMPost actions
Hmmm, this is a great shot. I like the color and the lighting, but the fingers killed it for me.
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