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07/04/2006 12:47:24 PMPost actions
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07/04/2006 11:19:58 AMPost actions
Composition:2/2
Aesthetics:1/2
Lighting:2/2
Focus:1/1
Personal tilt:2/3
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07/02/2006 03:12:49 AMPost actions
Nice place...but you really shouldn't open your umbrella indoors.
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06/30/2006 11:07:47 PMPost actions
This would have worked better for me with a background the was in keeping with the bad luck theme. 6
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06/30/2006 02:27:32 PMPost actions
The background is a bit distracting. The eye leads to the dining room and the first impression I got was that you were having company for dinner. I'm sure that's not what you were wanting to portray. I bet a different crop would have worked better.
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06/30/2006 02:01:18 PMPost actions
Nicely done. I like the two scenes.
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06/29/2006 09:46:55 PMPost actions
bad luck to open your umbrella indoors dude!
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06/29/2006 07:19:18 PMPost actions
I like the sharp focus of this and the lighting is good. The composition of the entry to the dinning room also adds interest in my opinion.
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06/29/2006 12:18:39 PMPost actions
I really like this. About the only thing that throws me a little is the lines of the door frames are off just a bit.
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06/29/2006 10:15:16 AMPost actions
It's probably just the bathtub leaking. ;^) Going to need some ceiling repair however.
BTW. Didn't you know it's bad luck to open an umbrella inside!!!
Cute idea. I think the composition would be stronger with less doorway. Put the doorframe on the thirds line. The dining room distracts the viewer...
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06/29/2006 09:51:01 AMPost actions
Great idea. I think cropping out half the dining room would make a more pleasing composition. 6
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06/29/2006 07:08:56 AMPost actions
nice lighting and a good shot overall, well done
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06/28/2006 10:29:09 PMPost actions
Great picture and nice background
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06/28/2006 06:23:38 PMPost actions
looks like your door is leaning. Good lighting on the model, but the umbrella has almost no detail in it at all, I would have liked to see some there.
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06/28/2006 02:52:09 PMPost actions
nicely done. that wall color is beautiful.
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06/28/2006 02:26:54 PMPost actions
the black against the pink wall is great, but I find the dining room totally distracting. This photo would have been much better with a large expanse of wall behind the subject and maybe just the moulding around the doorway showing- or maybe a small piece of art work somewhere to confirm it was indoors
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06/28/2006 01:47:23 PMPost actions
Hmm, the composition seems to be a little bit off.
I would've included a little bit of water drops here and there..
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06/28/2006 12:35:34 PMPost actions
I like the contrasting colors of this shot
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06/28/2006 09:28:39 AMPost actions
Im thinking black raindrops or confettie or something. it needs a Visual effect to show 'It's' Raining. other wise this is more along the lines of 'Is it' Raining.
Also, doesn't give me the feel that he is indoors. The lighting suggests outdoors. Even though the doorway looks inside.
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06/28/2006 08:33:34 AMPost actions
The black umbrella and the wall provide a great contrast
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