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06/09/2006 04:26:09 AM |
Hi from the Critique Club!
Lucky you getting 18 comments:))
This image made me smile and most voters always react well to humour and creativity.
How could you have improved on this? Well the lighting is very flat and dull, try experimenting with various light sources, and positioning.
You could have upped the brightness/contrast in PS to give it a boost, but you would have made that blue background even noisier. You could have lightened and strengthened the yellow with selective colour.
Moving the banana forward would have given more depth to the image and lessened the distraction of the noisy background.
Your focus seems a little soft especially on the left-hand side. A Smaller aperture would have overcome this.
Thanks for the smile;) |
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06/07/2006 02:31:51 AM |
| Thanks for suggestion and so many comments 18 ! |
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06/06/2006 08:19:36 AM |
| Velvet underground anyone :) ... anyone??? Beuler? ... Anyway, Nice idea ... I think bubbles and more dramatic lighting might have been a nice touch but I like the idea. |
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06/05/2006 08:47:58 AM |
| nice, very creative, and original. love this picture!!!! |
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06/04/2006 02:53:47 PM |
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06/03/2006 07:08:49 PM |
| Interesting concept ... it may be a little close to the background ... |
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06/02/2006 07:06:36 PM |
| the scope is a great touch. |
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06/02/2006 05:13:05 PM |
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06/02/2006 07:30:46 AM |
| Great idea. Pic is very noisy though, especially in the background. Also is not as well focused as it could be. |
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06/02/2006 12:34:45 AM |
| I got to give it points simply for making me laugh. |
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06/01/2006 10:14:47 PM |
| Very creative, lighting could be improved IMHO. |
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06/01/2006 04:52:47 PM |
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06/01/2006 09:46:03 AM |
| You tried, but quite honestly the composition's not very strong, it's underexposed and needs a tighter crop. |
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05/31/2006 11:19:39 PM |
| Nice so bad its good I like it |
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05/31/2006 05:32:38 PM |
| That's just stupid. But imaginative, unlike most others here. |
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05/31/2006 03:51:30 PM |
| wow, thats all i can say, but for the humor i give you a 6 |
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05/31/2006 10:06:53 AM |
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05/31/2006 08:54:48 AM |
| definitely in the spirit of the Beatles. |
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05/31/2006 12:54:21 AM |
| love the idea. dont like the background nor the light. |
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05/31/2006 12:15:05 AM |
| Pretty noisy. Looks like last minute, but cute idea. |
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