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08/24/2003 11:24:30 PM |
| Nice and simple with good clarity and bold colors. I may have shown some sand direct under the boat but I'm not sure, I would have to see it. -T |
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08/22/2003 06:18:41 PM |
| The boat is very much the focal point and the sky (negative space) does not create the WOW of the shot,, the red bouy does. IMO |
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08/20/2003 09:16:12 AM |
Wow this is a nice shot. Compositionally I would have to say that the ship just a tad bit closer to one of the bottom corners would have been a bit more attractive to the eye. Your sky is wonderful. your colors are great. This is a strong shot.
The water is a mucky Blah, but that is not your fault. Looks like things are a bit stirred up out there. Wonderful job. |
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08/19/2003 06:05:08 PM |
| the reds take the eye right out into the space |
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08/18/2003 10:27:15 PM |
| Negative space should have a purpose. This is negative space for the sake of the challenge. |
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08/18/2003 03:21:02 PM |
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08/18/2003 02:56:56 PM |
It is a bit tight framed at the bottom of the boat... great colors!
that pink thing would be better off I think...
good luck in the challenge |
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08/18/2003 07:56:08 AM |
| The center-haters will rate you down a notch or two for the boat's position. But I think it is visually pleasing that way. It's not my kind of beach, but the boat makes it look good to me. |
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08/18/2003 06:10:06 AM |
| nice subject. Might work better if it was not centered along the bottom. Maybe just a bit to the left? |
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08/18/2003 12:52:52 AM |
| the subject is the wow of this image, not the surrounding area. nice shot though. |
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08/18/2003 12:30:24 AM |
| Such marvelous tones here! I'd like to see what would happen if the boat were farther to the right--more rule of thirds orientation. It might make the negative space speak even more loudly of the encompassing world the boat is in. |
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