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08/24/2003 11:24:30 PM			 | 
		
		| Nice and simple with good clarity and bold colors. I may have shown some sand direct under the boat but I'm not sure, I would have to see it.  -T |  
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08/22/2003 06:18:41 PM			 | 
		
		| The boat is very much the focal point and the sky (negative space) does not create the WOW of the shot,, the red bouy does. IMO |  
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08/20/2003 09:16:12 AM			 | 
		
		Wow this is a nice shot.  Compositionally I would have to say that the ship just a tad bit closer to one of the bottom corners would have been a bit more attractive to the eye.  Your sky is wonderful.  your colors are great.  This is a strong shot.
 The water is a mucky Blah, but that is not your fault.  Looks like things are a bit stirred up out there.  Wonderful job. |  
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08/19/2003 06:05:08 PM			 | 
		
		| the reds take the eye right out into the space |  
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08/18/2003 10:27:15 PM			 | 
		
		| Negative space should have a purpose.  This is negative space for the sake of the challenge. |  
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08/18/2003 03:21:02 PM			 | 
		
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08/18/2003 02:56:56 PM			 | 
		
		It is a bit tight framed at the bottom of the boat... great colors!
 
 that pink thing would be better off I think...
 
 good luck in the challenge |  
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08/18/2003 07:56:08 AM			 | 
		
		| The center-haters will rate you down a notch or two for the boat's position. But I think it is visually pleasing that way. It's not my kind of beach, but the boat makes it look good to me. |  
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08/18/2003 06:10:06 AM			 | 
		
		| nice subject.  Might work better if it was not centered along the bottom.  Maybe just a bit to the left? |  
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08/18/2003 12:52:52 AM			 | 
		
		| the subject is the wow of this image, not the surrounding area. nice shot though. |  
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08/18/2003 12:30:24 AM			 | 
		
		| Such marvelous tones here! I'd like to see what would happen if the boat were farther to the right--more rule of thirds orientation. It might make the negative space speak even more loudly of the encompassing world the boat is in. |  
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