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09/24/2006 11:15:11 PM |
| I just found this picture (I feel so lame) Absolutely wonderful! |
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05/10/2006 11:19:12 PM |
Hi from the Critique Club. Here is the critique you requested. Please feel free to PM me with any questions or comments.
First of all, let me say that you did a wonderful job on the composition and processing of this picture. YOu definitely captured a piece of history that is unfamiliar to many im sure.
I especially like how the picture is divided into thirds horizontally with the green grass leading to the white clouds, followed by the blue sky. Color saturation is very nice, especially the nice warm tones where the sun is hitting the spreader.
My two criticisms are these: Some of the grass in the foreground is distracting, especially the light colored grass against the spreader. it tends to take my eyes up and past the spreader to the nice blue sky. The second one i'm not sure of but it seems like the trees on the RH side are a little too much, or they crowd the RH side of the spreader. This is just my opinion and i may be way off base. I just feel that a little more space on that end of the spreader would separate it more from the background and make it more of a focal point.
Good score in the challenge and i look forward to seeing more of your work.
Cheers,
mark |
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05/08/2006 10:46:37 PM |
| You weren't lying, this is great! :-D |
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05/07/2006 12:58:43 PM |
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05/07/2006 07:49:36 AM |
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05/06/2006 10:58:15 AM |
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05/06/2006 05:18:39 AM |
| Lovely sky. Colour satuation good but its a bit busy with all the grass at the front. I think it would have worked better if there was less stalks (on the left)- which would make the object stand out a little more. A great shot though. |
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05/06/2006 03:48:27 AM |
| great processing, colours. |
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05/05/2006 05:21:09 PM |
| Wonderful and well composed photo, great colours. |
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05/05/2006 12:06:13 PM |
| Looks like the sky was very cooperative! Beautiful light and colors. Lovely image. |
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05/04/2006 10:16:27 AM |
| Great color tones and nice detail. I like the composition, but it seems just a tad on the busy side with all the elements. |
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05/03/2006 09:38:15 PM |
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05/03/2006 08:25:12 PM |
| Great sky, and alo a great image as well..... |
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05/03/2006 05:05:51 PM |
| really cool effect on the sky. |
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05/03/2006 04:12:04 PM |
| The sky looks great. I wish we had a little closer view of the old tractor/wagon as it's a little hard to see the details from this perspective and distance (and it look s like a good subject). |
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05/03/2006 02:17:46 PM |
| The contrast between the green of the grasa and the blue of hte sky is very nice. I also like the composition and the choice of subject. Nice photograph overall. |
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05/02/2006 06:38:28 PM |
| Nice shoot. The enhanced colors and sky work well. Good luck -7- |
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05/02/2006 08:03:44 AM |
| Great colors ! Maybe a bit dark but I like it. |
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05/02/2006 01:22:39 AM |
| Something about old and rusty stuff in a green field, like it lots.. |
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05/01/2006 11:56:26 PM |
| Nice colors, but I'd like to see the camera higher or the tall dead grass cut away so the spreader would show up more clearly. |
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05/01/2006 06:12:49 PM |
| Very nice job here. Perfect saturation on the colors, and composition is spot-on. |
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05/01/2006 12:46:11 PM |
| Great colors!! Contrast is excellent! |
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05/01/2006 05:22:58 AM |
| Nice picture, love all these nice colors togegher.... |
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05/01/2006 01:57:28 AM |
| Now this is simply STUNNING!!! My pick so far for a ribbon, beautiful sky, good application of rule of thirds, strong composition, striking colours - I could go on and on... Best of luck with your fine entry. 10 |
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05/01/2006 12:20:59 AM |
| Love the sky/cloud coloring. |
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05/01/2006 12:10:42 AM |
| Beautiful, I love the great use of color and the dynamic sky and composition. Works well here - 8 |
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