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05/10/2006 03:32:35 PM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
I see that I also left you a comment during the challenge. Reading back through, I will echo some of what I said there. Your composition is nice outside of the new blooms on the right side of the frame. I like your rule of thirds use, but perhaps placing the subject on the right vertical thirds would have eliminated those distracting blooms. I see that a couple of others also made that comment. Your point of view and depth of field work very well together to add to the quality of this shot, as do the contrasting colors. With the advanced editing challenge, I think I Might have tried to enhance the DOF blur of the background and saturate the reds just a bit more. |
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05/06/2006 07:54:19 AM |
| Magical, and love the color contrast..... |
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05/05/2006 10:57:52 PM |
| love the red against the green. I would have liked a tighter crop. an 8 from me. |
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05/03/2006 11:30:00 PM |
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05/03/2006 06:16:32 PM |
| the title is not correct because flower shoot does never stand out ... try to find something interesting around your house there is lot of things other then flowers. Sorry but they are just to many (and cats also) |
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05/03/2006 11:01:58 AM |
nice, simple, clear, crisp.
I don't like the bottom right flowers though.
Maybe if they were in focus also? |
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05/02/2006 04:29:49 PM |
| Well seen and great clarity. I also like the DOF use that you accomplished here, but I thin that the new blooms and large leaves on the right are distracting the viewr from your subject. Maybe shifting you position to the left would have bettered this shot. |
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05/01/2006 06:34:52 PM |
| Very effective composition - colors really pop - DOF works well. Very nice job. |
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05/01/2006 05:37:53 PM |
| I think that I would have cropped the two flowers on the right. |
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05/01/2006 12:45:57 PM |
| This is a nice profil of a flower. The green is this photo is sort of overwhelming. It might be nice to desaturate the green just a little bit. |
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05/01/2006 02:49:44 AM |
| Excellent use of depth of field and color. |
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05/01/2006 12:44:41 AM |
| Would have been excellent for complementary colours, (good for this too). Beautiful flower with great light. Good luck. |
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