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05/07/2006 01:01:03 AM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
Interesting to do a critique on your image but it is difficult if you don't give us any information in your photographers comments. When we do a critique, we go past just the photographic result, that's what voters comments do. The critique looks at what you were trying to achieve, how you wanted it to look and what issues you had in getting the image captured and ready for voting.
First Impression - the most important one:
Lovely, nice framing of the people against the window ... lovely colours.
Composition:
I think this really works for this shot ... with the people on one side and the tower in the other frame it gives it a real balance.
Subject:
Meets the challenge with added flair.
Technical (Colour and light):
I like this .. it is a little 'dull' in some ways e.g. not bright colours but oh so appropriate for the shot.
To grow its vote?:
Top 25 .. is great ... and this is a good solid shot .. I am not sure how to get it a higher score .. but take a look at the top ten .. what do you think is missing?
Summary:
Great shoot .. you are doing really good stuff .. keep it up.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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05/01/2006 09:20:14 AM |
| I would have liked to see this do better. I see symbolism in it. Nicely done. Top 25 isn't too bad a finish. Congrats. |
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05/01/2006 02:59:26 AM |
| Should have gone even higher. I scored this the highest of all. |
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04/30/2006 11:30:48 PM |
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04/30/2006 11:30:30 PM |
| this captures manhattan very well. good job. |
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04/30/2006 10:56:13 PM |
| If this is your view. I applaud you. good selection for the challenge and like the colors from the sunset. |
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04/30/2006 09:55:18 PM |
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04/30/2006 06:02:21 PM |
| oh, i like this one.. the negative space adds to it |
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04/30/2006 03:15:41 PM |
| This is great! I would put this in the top 10 also. Good Luck. |
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04/30/2006 11:18:12 AM |
| Nice candid shot, could see this in a newspaper, would have been great for photojournalism II too. |
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04/30/2006 09:01:57 AM |
| If you could've moved yourself to the left a bit to center the building a bit more in it's window, it would've been nice, but only you know if that was feasible. Nice colors. |
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04/30/2006 01:52:15 AM |
| This is fantastic. Great light. The third person on the tight is merging a bit too much with the tall man IMO. 9. |
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04/30/2006 12:44:34 AM |
| Most excellent shot... excellent technical control, great composition... Top points! |
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04/29/2006 11:53:43 PM |
| Very nice. the golden; tones of the wall are similar to the sunset color. I like how the two people are balancing INSIDE, the building that we are seeing in the left window OUTSIDE. Nice job. |
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04/29/2006 10:52:19 PM |
| Super composition and colors. One of my favorites. |
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04/29/2006 08:23:47 PM |
Very nice!
Love the exposure, nice cloudwork aswell |
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04/29/2006 04:28:14 PM |
| That looks like a really interesting scene...I bet somehow it could be a bit more interesting though, maybe a different angle or something. |
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04/29/2006 01:53:54 PM |
| love the colors selected here and the post processing :) |
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04/29/2006 12:58:25 PM |
| Great light and good photo, it seems to be oversharpened.. |
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04/29/2006 10:37:44 AM |
| Very interesting, not sure if I like the people or not. I know I like the window to the left and the building subject in the clouds, excellent! |
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04/29/2006 10:18:03 AM |
| A good composition and a nice mood. The people are a bit oversharpened. I like the blending of natural and artificial light, composition is nicely balanced. Good work. |
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04/29/2006 09:35:37 AM |
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04/29/2006 09:09:50 AM |
| Wonderful colours, particularly the inside walls. I'd have crouched or raised myself on tiptoes to place the building on the left (Empire State?) better. The silhouettes could be more effective... perhaps a couple in profile? |
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04/29/2006 05:47:09 AM |
| So cool! See this finishing in the top ten. |
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04/29/2006 12:33:01 AM |
| great shot I know where this was taken, I like that also you have the people on the right in the shot. |
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04/28/2006 10:03:42 PM |
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04/28/2006 03:10:50 PM |
| I like this, except for slight halo-ing around the people and edges of window. |
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04/27/2006 06:52:13 PM |
| This is one of the best entries in terms of making the window really integral to the shot - rather than included as a border/ frame or just to meet the challenge. I like how one window showcases the view and the other silhouettes the people who are looking at it. Colours are lovely, lighting is great. It looks oversharpened to me though perhaps that's just haloing from the light. |
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04/27/2006 07:29:34 AM |
| I love NYC...this is fantastic...hope it does well for you |
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04/26/2006 11:58:56 PM |
| Cool shot! This should do well for you! |
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04/26/2006 08:00:27 AM |
| This has got all sorts of brutal sharpening halos, and I don't care at all. I like the whacky, interesting composition, and I like the effect created by the processing artifacts ... as if the image is created by "cut-out" primary components, but balanced with beautifully subtle secondary details (sky and city background). Bold and pleasing. 8. |
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04/25/2006 10:13:57 PM |
| too bad you didn't have more separation between the 2nd and 3rd person. But, what can you do? 8 |
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04/25/2006 03:31:05 PM |
| Nice lighting and composition |
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04/25/2006 02:22:16 PM |
| Great composition and warm color pallete. Gives a nice emotive quality to the photo. |
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04/24/2006 11:52:20 PM |
| Nice composition and warm colors |
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04/24/2006 02:27:28 PM |
| Nice colours. I like the balance in the picture. |
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04/24/2006 07:52:04 AM |
| nice colors and composition |
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