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05/07/2006 01:04:48 AM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
Interesting to do a critique on your image but it is difficult if you don't give us any information in your photographers comments. When we do a critique, we go past just the photographic result, that's what voters comments do. The critique looks at what you were trying to achieve, how you wanted it to look and what issues you had in getting the image captured and ready for voting.
First Impression - the most important one:
Yup .. you get the cute vote.
Composition:
This works well with the frame and the crop you have choosen.
Subject:
Meets the challenge .. does so well.
Technical (Colour and light):
nice use of the yellow and blues ... I like the way the frame looks quite old through lack of paint.
To grow its vote?:
need something else to focus on other than just cute ... a cross point of interest .. perhaps the child doing something other than posing.
Summary:
Good shot ... keep it up.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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04/30/2006 11:06:24 PM |
| too cute...wish i could see more of the window in this particular challange...7 |
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04/30/2006 10:07:54 PM |
| Her smile is worth at least 10. good colors 10 |
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04/30/2006 09:31:04 PM |
| Nice lighting, not as keen on the sharpness though, seems like it´s slightly out of focus. |
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04/30/2006 03:53:21 PM |
| Yes very nice. You got a great model there! |
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04/29/2006 10:57:02 PM |
| Smile is definitely on the forced side. Nice composition. |
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04/29/2006 10:16:16 PM |
| Cute model. She looks happy to be helping. I like this picture except for the blue background. A more normal setting would be preferrable IMHO. |
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04/29/2006 09:29:38 PM |
| the blue background looks unreal to me... cute girl and all but the work with the background draws it down a little.. |
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04/29/2006 07:40:00 PM |
| Cute girl and nice picture |
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04/29/2006 04:36:15 PM |
| The lighting feels very artificial. The complete lack of shadows from the window, the bright blue background - |
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04/29/2006 10:39:02 AM |
| Great shot, cute child with a cheeky smile. Well done with the colouring and composition. |
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04/29/2006 07:33:02 AM |
| im sure you wanted the viewer to notice the window trim but i would have preffered a closer crop on the frame containing the face. otherwise. nice photo! |
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04/29/2006 07:25:45 AM |
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04/28/2006 10:05:26 PM |
| too oooey and gooey for me |
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04/28/2006 03:59:21 PM |
| Major cuteness factor! What a wonderful expression. This will do well! |
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04/27/2006 06:59:27 AM |
| nice portrait...well done...the blue and the golden hair lopok great together |
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04/25/2006 10:28:13 PM |
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04/25/2006 10:11:38 PM |
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04/25/2006 03:13:28 PM |
| Cute. Technicals are very good. Has a bit too much of a pre-meditated "catalogue" feel for my tastes, but nice shot nontheless... my vote is a 7 |
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04/25/2006 03:08:33 PM |
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04/24/2006 06:09:39 PM |
| Beautiful smile, beautiful girl, and a beautiful photo..... |
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04/24/2006 02:28:46 PM |
| this looks a little too "unnatural" for my taste. It is a darling portrait, though. |
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04/24/2006 05:07:44 AM |
| Nice portrait, I think the backdrop is a bit too much |
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