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A Moment to Herself
A Moment to Herself
sir_bazz


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Window Framed (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Pentax *ist DS
Lens: Pentax FA 50mm f/1.4 AF
Location: The Bedroom
Date: Apr 20, 2006
Aperture: f1.4
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/125
Galleries: Emotive, Black and White
Date Uploaded: Apr 20, 2006

 My wife Rachel sitting at our bedroom window. Rearranged some furniture to get a clean shot before turning the garden hose on outside to help hide the side fence.

Statistics
Place: 13 out of 180
Avg (all users): 6.5894
Avg (commenters): 7.4286
Avg (participants): 6.1778
Avg (non-participants): 6.8269
Views since voting: 2303
Views during voting: 425
Votes: 246
Comments: 37
Favorites: 2 (view)

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 05/02/2006 07:31:47 AM
Inspired bit of composition here mate. Nice work.
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 05/01/2006 09:20:44 PM
This is beautiful
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 05/01/2006 02:22:04 PM
What an awesome photo! Genius idea to hose down the window to look like a gray rainy day! Congratulations on such a strong finish.
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 05/01/2006 01:19:07 PM
It is a nice composition of repeating lines and shapes. A very peaceful capture. My only concern are a few distracting bright spots but these do not IMO take away from this beautiful photo.
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 05/01/2006 10:18:41 AM
Love this image, great job.
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 05/01/2006 09:25:53 AM
Great shot, Garry! Congrats on the top20.
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 05/01/2006 12:34:13 AM
Great shot... brilliant idea using the hose!! Congratulations.

Message edited by author 2006-05-01 00:34:29.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/30/2006 11:13:14 PM
I like this being a monotone. Maybe it could have been a little more tightly cropped?
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 04/30/2006 05:34:32 PM
black and white works well
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 04/30/2006 05:03:25 PM
nice light and shadow.
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 04/30/2006 03:06:16 PM
Very soothing, nice photograph.
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 04/30/2006 11:16:23 AM
Nice, like it a lot but if I were composing this, I would have put her in the left corner instead of her feet in the right one. 6 from me.
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 04/29/2006 10:52:51 PM
Nice melancholy composition with well-balance tones. Meets the challenge well, too.
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 04/29/2006 06:04:15 PM
Good use of B&W. Nice composition
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 04/29/2006 05:25:21 PM
a beautiful moment well captured. best of luck
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 04/29/2006 04:26:57 PM
That's nice...great use of available light...I like shots like this for some reason. Good job.
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 04/29/2006 04:10:32 PM
One of the best so far. Good lighting and composition. I wonder what she's thinking?
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 04/29/2006 02:02:23 PM
This is one of my top rated images the use of Band W here is excellent
Congrats on a fantastic image
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 04/29/2006 10:30:58 AM
Beautiful light and great use of B&W. Love the rain on the window and her jumper, make me feel cold just looking at this photo.
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 04/29/2006 10:01:19 AM
A classic, very well done. 9
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 04/29/2006 08:03:04 AM
You caught a very nice mood here. Backlighting is always difficult, but you have nice control of your highlights ansd shadow detail, resulting in a pleasant photo. I think I might have considered pointing the camera a bit more to the right, so that the window is centered in the frame and the subject is a bit more off centered to the left - the empty wall to the left looks a bit odd, compositionally, to my eye...
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 04/29/2006 06:28:07 AM
A top image
Wonderful cleanness to this and quailty is in the image and the set up
Nice work
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 04/29/2006 02:36:57 AM
Nice contemplative mood.
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 04/28/2006 10:30:19 PM
I really like this shot, you have really captured a mood. Good luck.
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 04/28/2006 08:37:25 AM
I would have shifted the whole image left a bit so the model was almost leaning againts the side of the photo but I think it's very good
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 04/28/2006 06:48:25 AM
The B&W works very well in this image ,the moment is perfect even it has been posed ,a lot of melanholie and thoughts in this 10
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 04/27/2006 11:43:11 AM
You have captured an emotion here, what a picture is mean't to do. 8
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 04/27/2006 07:20:52 AM
lovely shot...very serene, nice in b and w...hope you do well with this
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 04/25/2006 10:16:48 PM
Well done on the exposure and compostion. A nice triangle shape within a rectangle
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 04/25/2006 02:44:20 PM
Very nice B&W here. The natural lighting and shadows really give this a soft, emotive feel. I would have prefered to see more crop to remove more of the dark left side since it gives the composition an unbalanced feel that does not appear intentional. Nice shot nonetheless... I vote a 7
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 04/25/2006 01:43:10 PM
Really lovely, B&W was a good choice for this.
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 04/25/2006 11:04:04 AM
This one has a great feel and works well in b&w. Good shot.
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 04/25/2006 09:09:14 AM
Great tones and contrast.
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 04/25/2006 02:07:11 AM
Very nice, and so warmimg and cosy.....
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 04/24/2006 10:26:16 PM
This is a lovely image, a warm cup of coffee/tea, sitting, watching the rain, so relaxing and peaceful, almost makes me sleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeepy, oh, sorry, started to doze off there, LOL :)

A very lovely image overall, the cropping threw me off just a bit leaving that extra over on the left but the more I look at it the more I like it. First glance I threw a 7 on this, raising to an 8, could use just a touch, a very tiny touch more contrast to me personally. But overall, well done
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 04/24/2006 11:37:23 AM
Interesting moment of serenity nicely portrayed.
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 04/24/2006 09:30:05 AM
Good idea, something I was toying with myself. Also good thought with the coffee cup too.
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