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12/04/2007 07:49:38 PM |
| I love the way the window frames the door and the lighting is really well done, I don't know if it is natural or done with flashes but I like how it is lit. |
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12/07/2006 10:36:00 PM |
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05/06/2006 12:17:40 AM |
HI from the Critique Club. Here is the critique you requested. Please feel free to pm me with any questions or comments.
First let me say...This was one of my favorite photos in the window challenge. I think it is well done, interesting, and shows skillfull postprocessing. So, i dont have much in the way to offer from a critical standpoint but here goes...:)
Composition: As i may have mentioned during the voting, the crooked framing of the windows is appealing. Gives the picture a otherwordly look. I assume the building is crooked, and that it was not caused by camera angle. Great composition.
Lighting: LIghting is nice and the only nitpic here is just that the black shirt/jacket is totally devoid of detail. I think just a hint might have improved picture slightly. Very minor IMO. Lighting on the faces is perfect BTW.
Post processing is well thought out with my only suggestion to be a slight darkening of the door behind the man. it seems rather light considering it is the interior of a building. Would have given the picture an even more mysterious feel.
I dont think i can add anything else. This is a very cool pic, well planned and executed. Self Portrait?? Good job and congrats on your high finish.
Cheers,
mark
Message edited by author 2006-05-06 00:18:44. |
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04/30/2006 11:26:12 PM |
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04/30/2006 11:05:53 PM |
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04/30/2006 10:20:06 PM |
| Very cool, like the processing int his one and the composition and the door makes this seem to go on forever, like if he were to step through the door he would end up in a room exactly as the one he was leaving. Strong image, gave it a 9. |
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04/30/2006 08:13:56 PM |
| Wonderful color! Very neat image.... |
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04/30/2006 05:37:29 PM |
| You found an amazing location for this challenge. It is most fitting. I think it would have worked a bit better if the model was not as close to the front wall. I like that you are showing only half of him though. The tilted frames add nicely to the dynamism of the leading lines. |
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04/30/2006 05:37:18 PM |
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04/30/2006 05:04:02 PM |
| cool shot nice post prossess and nice coloration |
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04/30/2006 02:34:56 PM |
| Love the warm tones and sinister feel. Nice composition with visual interest. |
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04/30/2006 12:23:33 AM |
| Great composition, colors and toning... well done and good luck |
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04/29/2006 08:42:51 PM |
| great colors and very interesting set up. |
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04/29/2006 08:37:58 PM |
Like the colors and frame :o)Nice work. Also the lightning.... Great.
Message edited by author 2006-05-01 05:06:15. |
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04/29/2006 06:01:42 PM |
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04/29/2006 04:22:28 PM |
| Very nicely done. Almost spooky. |
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04/29/2006 04:10:20 PM |
| the repeating rythms of the window frames make this shot outstanding. - 8 |
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04/29/2006 01:08:35 PM |
| Good photo, I like it, but would be better with the person looking in the lens.. |
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04/29/2006 11:06:16 AM |
| I like how the closed window is framed by the open one. The character in between adds a lot. The post-processing is well done too. |
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04/29/2006 09:48:19 AM |
| Fantastic image! Great perspective and colours, love the title, will be interested to see how this one goes. |
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04/29/2006 09:18:22 AM |
| Could be a very strong composition, but I'm not convinced by your model, whose expression is a little bland here. I'd have perhaps burnt in your outside wall a tad to focus attention inside the window. The focus appears to be on the outside wall and not on the subject. |
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04/29/2006 08:33:56 AM |
| Ahh nice photo maybe over used photoshop but it at least looks better then alot of photos here in this challenge. |
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04/28/2006 10:03:10 PM |
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04/28/2006 02:52:19 PM |
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04/28/2006 02:05:55 PM |
| Wow! Great impact! Did you do any lighting inside or was that natural? |
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04/28/2006 07:56:03 AM |
| Nice Composition! Artful! |
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04/27/2006 06:50:01 PM |
| Love the colours, the textures of the worn surfaces and the door behind the window. Something about the edges of the window feel way too soft - the detail isn't there and it feels kind of odd. I like the partly hidden pose though it's a little forced. |
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04/27/2006 06:26:26 AM |
| great shot, wonderful title, excellent colours and composition...this is fantastic...hope it does well for you |
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04/27/2006 02:58:35 AM |
Fits challenge=5
Color/lighting=1
DOF/focus=1
Wow factor/uniqueness=1
Attractiveness=1
I like the depth of this image and the colors are nice but not too much to distract the viewer from seeing the subject and even the background. Nicely done. |
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04/25/2006 09:32:57 PM |
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04/25/2006 09:19:12 PM |
| Good dodge/burn for extra impact. I also like the crookedness in the windows. Makes it look like the building is falling down. 9 |
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04/25/2006 08:26:34 PM |
| like the depth and darkness |
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04/25/2006 02:29:47 PM |
| I really like the composition and perspective you used here. The photo itself is full of contrasts, texture, and layers. Very nice.... 7 |
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04/25/2006 01:09:37 PM |
| great location you've got there! love the colors and the composition makes you look around the photo. great job! 9 |
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04/25/2006 12:21:47 PM |
| Nice colors. I also like the window or door behind the figure. Adds a great 3rd dimension to it. 7 |
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04/25/2006 02:18:37 AM |
| Strong impact, re color and composition..... |
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04/24/2006 09:43:12 PM |
| Nice colors but the shadows seem a bit off to me. A bit too much burning maybe. |
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04/24/2006 07:17:19 PM |
| Window, door, bright foreground, dark subject. They mix well for a very virbrant image. Well done. |
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04/24/2006 06:42:38 PM |
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04/24/2006 06:53:00 AM |
| great one, indeed!like the colours and the beautifull face on it:) |
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04/24/2006 06:11:23 AM |
| Good work, I like the wooden door or shutter in the background. |
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