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04/25/2006 12:42:54 PM |
| Inclusion of other items not relevant to the subject is making this photo to busy. Another angle and zoom that would isolate Timmy and the swan would really help make the subject pop. |
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04/25/2006 04:33:39 AM |
| Out of focus and Timmy and the Swan is not the focus point in this shot. |
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04/24/2006 03:39:24 PM |
| Your shot is a little blurry and the composition is weak. I think moving around to get a better angle on the subject would have been better. |
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04/22/2006 05:22:42 PM |
| I find the post distracting. |
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04/22/2006 02:47:25 AM |
| the focus here is a bit off, and I think it would have been better to frame the pic without the light in it. |
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04/21/2006 05:41:51 PM |
| Interesting subject, but the pole in the middle detracts from the shot for me. |
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04/21/2006 02:12:27 PM |
| a bit OOF. not very sharp |
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04/21/2006 12:25:52 PM |
| Looks a bit out of focus to me. |
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04/21/2006 11:36:06 AM |
| Foreground object distracting. |
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04/20/2006 01:36:07 PM |
| Image is not in focus. Composition would be stronger if you focused just on the boy and swan and left out that post right down the middle. |
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04/20/2006 07:35:36 AM |
| The post in the center doesn't help this. My reaction to this image would be better if there were more focus on Timmy and the Swan, and if the post and yard lamp were not in the picture. The positive (I'm not going to give you only negative critique!) is that you did a nice job of positioning Timmy and the Swan in the image - rule of thirds works here. |
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04/19/2006 08:13:43 PM |
| The pole in the middle of this shot is very distracting. Shooting from a different angle would help this shot a lot. |
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04/19/2006 06:44:28 AM |
| I like how you have composed this..... |
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04/19/2006 12:43:33 AM |
| Post in middle distracts from rest of subject. An angle without that would have been more effective. |
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