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04/30/2006 12:01:08 AM |
| This photo, to me, has lost focus on the eyes, which would have made this a tad more interesting a photo. I do love the tones though. |
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04/29/2006 10:48:11 AM |
| Greetings from the Critique club. First let me tell you what I love about this photo. I like composition of this photo. I love the models expression and the framing of her hands for the face. The shallow DOF works well for the right side of the photo, however getting a little deeper DOF and sharper focus on the eyes would make this photo stand out. I also feel that the hair in front of the right eye is distracting. Overall a pretty good attempt with a few changes this could be a very well done shot. |
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04/24/2006 07:36:50 PM |
so, yeah. learned a lot about aperture from the comments. thanks so much. i really appreciate everyone taking the time to comment.
have a great week. |
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04/23/2006 04:39:52 AM |
| Love the composition. Wish the eyes were more in focus. Good luck. |
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04/22/2006 01:50:22 PM |
| Lovely eyes and expression. Good crop. The focus seem to be little soft though. Still a great capture. 8. |
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04/21/2006 06:49:39 PM |
| Great image - the skin tones and eye/lip colors are great (nice and rich). Only nit on this one is for this type of picture, the eyes just really need to pop, and they are coming across a little soft. Nice overall composition though! |
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04/20/2006 08:25:33 PM |
| Beautiful closeup...nice composition and use of DOF. :) |
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04/20/2006 07:18:52 PM |
| this could be lovely, but it's out of focus. the colours, exposure and compo are great. what amazing eye colour |
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04/20/2006 05:52:25 PM |
| delicious, I shall attend. lol |
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04/19/2006 07:58:53 AM |
| First thing that popped into my mind when I opened this was that it needs better focus on the eyes, other than that a pretty decent photo. |
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04/19/2006 01:49:36 AM |
why are you focused on her nose?
you should have focused on her eyes! :) |
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04/18/2006 07:52:55 PM |
| Looks like the focus fell on the strands of hair and not on her face. Beautiful eyes! |
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04/18/2006 05:45:18 PM |
| Focus is off. otherwise it would be a great shot. |
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04/18/2006 01:11:35 PM |
| Beautiful subject, wonderful pose, perfectly framed. My only concern is that the focus seems to be on the tip of her nose, rather than on her eyes. Otherwise, great shot. |
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04/18/2006 09:07:15 AM |
| It looks like the aperture here is too large, more of the models face in focus would be better, or with as shallow dof as this the focus should be on her left eye not the nose. The light is a bit too yellow as you have probably just used a regular lamp, you could fix this in Photoshop. Hence this I like the framing and the expression of the model, don't take me wrong, this is not a bad photo in whole. |
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04/18/2006 01:52:33 AM |
| Gorgeous girl! Great shot! |
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04/17/2006 11:28:45 PM |
| Eyes aren't sharp (focus seems to be on tip of nose). |
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04/17/2006 06:20:13 PM |
| I really like the composition here, but the focus seems to be slightly off. It's catching the tip of the nose, rather than the eyes. Beautiful color on those eyes though! |
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04/17/2006 05:01:04 PM |
ike this shot a lot.
The best bit is how relaxed she looks.
Lovely skin tones and i love the freckles
Good luck
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Kev |
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04/17/2006 01:30:20 PM |
| Nice picture, needs more DOF |
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04/17/2006 12:24:20 PM |
| a bit of a rack focus to emphasize the eyes instead of the tip of the nose would really make her awesome green eyes 'inviting'.. |
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04/17/2006 12:19:14 PM |
| Changing your aperture to get her whole face in focus might have helped, but still a nice shot. |
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04/17/2006 07:52:04 AM |
| Soft image but I like it. Still I think it would have been better if her face was more in focus as she has an interesting face. |
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04/17/2006 06:49:40 AM |
| I wish this was sharper because she has gorgeous eyes. I love the pose and the cupped face. PLEASE try this shot again, because it will make a great portrait if it is sharper. Focus on the eyes. There's a nice warmth to the colour of the lighting thatI like. Not sure if the voters will agree... |
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04/17/2006 05:46:47 AM |
| Great setup, attractive model, good composition but spoiled by a couiple of things. Your depth of field has defeated a really good sharp aoutcome and the background to the right could certainly do with killing off. If you didn't want to centre her then egt in there with a burn tool and darken it out to nothing. |
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