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07/17/2003 07:49:33 AM |
| I wish u hadn´t cut of the hands...otherwise a great image, the skin tone is good |
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07/16/2003 06:06:38 PM |
| I really like the combinations of textures and tones in this picture. I think they compliment eachother nicely. The white crumpled bedspread against the smooth darkness of her flesh works very well. good job. |
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07/12/2003 08:11:02 PM |
| The lighting on this shot seems off. The bottom of the shot, where the detail is most interesting (hair, face, arms) is too dark, while the rest of the shot is rather light. If the darkness were consistent throughout the shot it might work, but since most of it is lit, I find myself wishing that the lower part were much more visable. |
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07/12/2003 06:21:02 PM |
| I like the well-lit back, neck and shoulders. The wrinkles material the model is on distracted me a first, but I like the image. |
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07/12/2003 02:50:07 PM |
| excellent job with the lighting in this shot... the 'definitions' are nicely highlighted and the texture created by that works well. I'm wondering if a stronger 'diagonal' theme with the arms woudl also work nicely in this shot. |
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07/12/2003 01:12:50 AM |
| What a back! The exposure and shadow on the back really highight the muscle tone and the skin looks great. The upside nature of the frame makes me feel a little uncomfortable, even theough the mood is definitely relaxed (I don't think that's good in this case). Still a very enjoyable image. |
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07/11/2003 06:34:47 PM |
| I like the tone of the skin, and the way the light sculpts her muscles. Wish her hand weren't cropped. While the rumpled white quilt makes a very nice background the buttons are a bit distracting. |
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07/11/2003 05:30:28 AM |
| lovely lighting / tones across the shoulders. I would have liked to have seen more of the models hair and less of the bum.. lighting not at its best at that end of the shot.. good work |
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07/11/2003 03:28:19 AM |
| fantastic physique. the lighting is not particularly flattering with the sepia tone. I might have used the free editing clause to level out her skin a bit. What I'm trying to say (without sounding like this will probably sound) is that her white butt (while quite attractive) stands out against the rest of her tanned self. Or maybe it's just the way the lights hit. I'd like to be drawn to her neck and shoulders, but the brightness keeps taking my eye up. make sense? |
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07/11/2003 03:11:49 AM |
| A nice shot with cool lighting, but the model itself is way too dark. It also lacks impact in that the sheet has very strong highlights and textures, while the model has little focal points. |
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07/11/2003 02:03:55 AM |
| wow, very clever and intriguing. |
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07/11/2003 12:19:01 AM |
| nice skin tones, and pose... would like to see a different angle of the camera on this one. I like how you took time on the hair .. lighting shows body details nicely. |
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07/11/2003 12:10:17 AM |
| The area to the right is very bright and draws your eye away from the subject. A little bit too contrasty |
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