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01/19/2004 01:48:27 AM |
| isn't it against the law to take nudes of under age children? Or is she older than she looks. Great pic but kinda felt like a perv veiwing it!!! |
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07/19/2003 07:53:49 PM |
Greets from the Critique Club:
Hi SharQ,
This is a really good nude. Everything is well lit and your contrast is very good. Technically, I think it is excellent.
I like the emotional and compositional side as well. Your model is sitting forward, engaging the camera and showing the world she is not afraid and is comfortable with her body.
The only annoyances are the missing toe mentioned by one of your commenters (not really a big deal), and the small triangle of light up in the top right hand corner.
Just all around good job! Best of luck with you future entries!
-Matt |
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07/17/2003 11:00:52 PM |
I like the pose of the model and her expression, is very natural. Light and DOF are very good and good choice in BW
Good luck |
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07/17/2003 07:34:09 AM |
| this is what a supermodel should look like, beautiful girl, wonderful pose, a job well done :) |
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07/16/2003 06:12:48 PM |
| I think you chose a great subject, great to see natural looking folks in the challenge. I think I would of like to have seen it with whole couch, though admittedly, probably wouldn't of worked at this sort of angle. nice job |
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07/16/2003 10:35:42 AM |
| Your model is very beuatiful :) This shot reminds me of a modern take of the very curvaceous women who used to be in vogue in the oil paintings. |
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07/15/2003 07:01:37 PM |
| This girl looks really young. Is it just me? |
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07/15/2003 03:48:12 PM |
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07/15/2003 02:21:17 PM |
| Nice lighting and pose, but where did her big toe go? |
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07/14/2003 11:32:09 PM |
| With a smile like that, what else is needed? Good composition. Maintaining focus through-out must have been a challenge - well done. |
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07/14/2003 02:29:17 PM |
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07/14/2003 01:23:07 AM |
| I like it... The smile and facial expression are great. I don\'t know if it was intentional, but the highlights on the feet seem to lead my eyes from head to foot so I get the feeling of one entirely comfortable and content person. The diagonal on the left supports her head and shoulders, but the buttons seem a little too dominate relative to the rest of the photo (only thing I could find as a possible recommendation for improvement). I\'ll sure I\'ll keep looking back at this one. |
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07/13/2003 04:39:04 AM |
| So much of this photo I like - but the wide angle distorts the image. Proportions are changed. (I like that this is no supermodel - regular people are things of beauty and elegance as well!) |
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07/12/2003 07:59:54 PM |
| Well done all around. Nothing extraordinary or especially different/unique here, but a solid shot for sure. |
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07/12/2003 03:06:28 PM |
| Beautiful setting, pose, lighting, and the expression you've captured really makes this an outstanding nude portrait and brings life to the photo. The model connects with the camera in a way that is hard to capture, oftentimes. Congrats. Lovely. 9 |
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07/12/2003 01:13:16 PM |
| She has a great expression |
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07/12/2003 10:12:24 AM |
| Superb lighting, love the smile |
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07/12/2003 02:45:48 AM |
| Superb composition and lighting. All the elements of glamour photography are present in this shot. |
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07/11/2003 11:50:51 PM |
| Well done. This is a very flattering photograph and I am sure your subject must be very pleased. Avery interesting composition and a perfect in B&W. -Tim |
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07/11/2003 09:40:24 PM |
| I think this is very nicely done... i love the composition and the smile on the model's face is excellent :) = 10 |
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07/11/2003 07:11:41 PM |
way to go! absolutely charming. she's so natural... and that smile really communicates that mix of shyness and hapiness she's feeling.
take that, super (thin) models!
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07/11/2003 05:49:56 PM |
| Very nice nude portrait, great lightning. 6. |
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07/11/2003 04:29:16 PM |
| great photo.... great smile... 9/10 |
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07/11/2003 04:04:36 PM |
| This is a very nicely composed shot! I would have liked the whole couch/chair arm included but in the current setting that would have thrown out the dynamics of the shot, so you made a good choice to crop it. The subjects skin has a wonderful glow and the focus is perfect. I am glad you entered a shot which included a non pencil thin subject and I hope your score does not suffer because the shot is awesome.10 |
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07/11/2003 03:55:59 PM |
Correct (sadly) but that doesn't mean she isn't just as beautiful. I love her smile!
If I could vote i'd give it a 9... It looks like her big toe has been cut off!. :) |
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07/11/2003 01:42:27 PM |
| The toning on this one is excellent! A nice pose, and great lighting, too. - 8 |
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07/11/2003 11:18:49 AM |
| You have captured a nice image with great a model, lighting and composition. The B&W is great too. |
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07/11/2003 11:17:37 AM |
| No, not average, classic and very cute. The light, focus, and composition are all very nicely done. Only negative is the panty line. Good good work here! |
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07/11/2003 11:12:56 AM |
| Difficult task, I would like more contrast though. 7 |
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07/11/2003 09:53:52 AM |
| I don't usually like shots with extreme foreshortening along a person's length, but you make it work pretty well. Nice composition. |
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07/11/2003 07:50:31 AM |
| What a beautiful model. You captured something really wonderful in her eyes! |
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07/11/2003 06:58:19 AM |
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07/11/2003 05:34:51 AM |
| Really nice shot, looks like your model was enjoying it! I love the warmth and spontaneity that is captured here. Nice lighting. 8 |
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07/11/2003 04:57:46 AM |
| This picture has been nicely set, although her pose has not been set to accenuate her body features. Still it is a picture with great detail. |
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07/11/2003 03:12:04 AM |
| I like the comfort in this picture. no fear of the photographer or camera (a self portrait? i don't know) lighting is conventional, but technically very sound. this looks quite professional, though it lacks commercial appeal - by that I mean it would be wonderful if you knew the person in the picture, but beyond that, it's very portrait-like (which is not at all an insult, by the way...just not my style of picture). 7 (a high score for me this challenge) |
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07/11/2003 01:31:46 AM |
| Pretty and plump! Great lighting and background. |
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07/11/2003 01:02:53 AM |
| This is lovely. The focus is perfect! Have a 10! |
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