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01/13/2006 12:34:57 AM |
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I don't believe the hand motion effect shown here is adding impact to the image. It does demonstrate an interesting technique, but I believe the photo would be stronger without that. A sweeping motion of the hand could have possibly produced something a bit more interesting to me, but the double hand image just makes me ask 'why?' I don't understand the intent or purpose of it. The duration of the exposure to make this effect has possibly made the image display motion blur in places where you don't want it also.
The subject is very strong, but I think some additional execution would be nice :)
John Setzler |
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01/08/2006 10:38:35 PM |
| I'm not sure I really understand this. But that's OK: I like it a lot better than most of the entries that I do understand. It's not a beautiful photograph, but it is interesting and challenges the viewer to think about its meaning. I like that. In spite of the fact that the title is a little awkward, I think your general intent is apparent. It's just the "multiple-exposure" of the hand that confuses me. However, I like ambiguity, so it's a 7. |
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01/06/2006 07:40:10 PM |
| This looks more like and ultrasound picture. |
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01/06/2006 12:32:46 PM |
| nice one--- its the basis of all mother hood---as a doctor i can feel teh pain a mother suffers during she bears a child in her womb--great job man. |
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01/06/2006 02:03:01 AM |
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01/05/2006 08:04:32 AM |
| Not sure what it is I'm looking at or what the message of the image os but I AM impressed by the treatment of the bottom hand and look forward to your submission comments |
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01/04/2006 10:42:38 PM |
| A powerful sentiment and a moving picture. I wonder if it would be possible to make more of the lighting to enhance the shape and form more. Good Luck with the challenge. |
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01/04/2006 01:35:25 PM |
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01/04/2006 12:15:14 PM |
| very cool effect with the grain of the picture. |
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01/03/2006 10:55:42 PM |
| Well done, I'm left wondering how you did the extra hand, good luck, hope you score well. |
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01/03/2006 08:43:58 PM |
| The composition needs a little work. The subject matter could have been better. The image quality is very poor. Has potential of being really creative. - 3 |
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01/03/2006 11:54:45 AM |
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01/03/2006 01:05:40 AM |
| i dont like the almost invisible second hand on the belly.. very blurry also. |
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01/02/2006 08:47:25 PM |
| neat technique with the long exposure good luck |
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01/02/2006 05:52:17 PM |
| I couldn't decide if the title is a grammar error, or if I'm missing something. I also don't quite get the extra hands...4 |
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