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11/18/2005 05:06:57 PM |
| i dont like the color cast shadows in the 3rd panel... a suggestion would be to select that area and desaturate it slightly or make it cooler (photo filter -> cooling filter or blue)... |
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11/17/2005 11:26:57 PM |
| Ah, I like that you have a 'story' here. There is a much stronger concept in this piece than in a great many in this challenge. I think you could have done a bit more with your measuring spoons - look at the angles from which the three shots were taken. the measuring spoons are all straight overhead, but the pie is at a 45 degree angle. I think it would have been compositionally stronger to have the leftmost shot of the spoons also taken at 45 degrees, which would give you a nice symmetry of perspective: 45 - 90 - 45. It would also have been nice to see some more consistency in the lighting. The pie shot has a lovely soft shadow - I'd like to see that soft lighting on the spoons as well. (7) |
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11/17/2005 04:10:01 PM |
| Perfect ode to the season! |
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11/17/2005 10:07:44 AM |
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11/17/2005 12:19:50 AM |
| hehe, the photo is fine, but your pie looks a little well done to me :-) |
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11/16/2005 11:17:26 PM |
| good temporal progression. The pie is a little dark looking. (not underexposed, but dark). |
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11/15/2005 02:24:21 PM |
| funny and interesting. good work. I esp like the colours in the middle pane |
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11/15/2005 02:57:07 AM |
| The clean, clear shots and the white background make this work well. Well done. |
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11/14/2005 10:49:46 PM |
| i love it! great idea and shots! 8 |
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11/14/2005 08:30:05 PM |
| I like this! original and makin' me hungry. :) nice job. |
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11/14/2005 06:57:40 PM |
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11/14/2005 06:49:00 PM |
| 6 - Good idea and execution. Criticism; definitely at least 640 width, enabling 'larger squares' would have made this even better. Coloring is good, good detail (even at this size) in the spices and the pie. Maybe not so tightly cropped on the right in the center frame, #2. Framing works. Nice and 'neat'. |
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11/14/2005 06:30:19 PM |
| would have been better I think with maybe a pumpkin in the first panel. |
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11/14/2005 01:43:27 PM |
| Nice! Would do very nicely as a print in a kitchen. |
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11/14/2005 03:40:31 AM |
| Mmmmmmmmmmm ! I love Pumpkin pie! Nice, timely and well executed entry! |
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11/14/2005 02:07:41 AM |
| Well-done. I especially like the middle frame. |
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11/14/2005 01:01:32 AM |
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11/14/2005 12:57:38 AM |
Thats a good looking pie!
Wouldn't mind the recipe for thanksgiving! |
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11/14/2005 12:31:10 AM |
| Excellent story told here. Can I come to your house for Thanksgiving? Well done. |
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