I think if you could have come and shot this at a time when there weren't any cars parked in front of the stores it would have had a better impact. As it is the cars block a lot of your subject (the windows) and take away from the picture.
ALthought the windows are transparent, and the colours for a night photo are really nice, there is not real subject or point of interest in this photograph.
the cars cover up a lot of the transparent windows...and the brightly lit signs (which i don't really view as transparent) draw more of my attention in the photo...
For me, the subject matter doesn't hold my interest as well as other entries in this challenge, but I think you did well capturing a night time scene - good colors and clarity.
I like the colours, reflection and shine... not all that inspired for transparency.. just me but i'm a curious gal.. whats going on behind those windows.. what do the people look like? ;) just one persons opinion but windows in and of themselves dont make me go.. I like the photograph though.