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06/14/2003 11:28:09 AM |
*Critique Club*
I think we can definately hear the sound in this shot.
I was thinking though, that when people are screaming at the top of their lungs, they don't usually have their eyes open, but I do see that her fists are cleched, which is another 'stereotype' of screaming at the top of your lungs.
Something that is bothering me in this shot, and I just can't seem to shake it off, is that her right eye (our left) is more in focus than the other one. I don't think anyone else mentioned this, so maybe it's just something that bothers me only, but I do find it a bit strange. Even that eyebrow is sharper focus than the other one.
I do really like the way it makes her hair look. Flipping out like you'd see in the cartoons with their hair all standing out on end, but here it's the angle that makes it look dramatic.
I personally like the extra room on the left of the shot. She's not all centered perfectly, and I think that goes well with the dramatic from above angle.
Lighting appears to have been just great for this shot.
Very nice.
~Heather~ |
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06/11/2003 03:22:06 AM |
| I knew you'll hit top 10 Nice Job. |
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06/08/2003 10:26:52 PM |
| Composition and point of view here suggest that her whole body is screaming. It really works! |
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06/08/2003 08:44:37 PM |
| Great angle and well composed. You captured the concept of sound very well in the face of your subject. |
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06/08/2003 08:30:54 PM |
my favorite----BEAUTIFUL photo....10
(actually, I like it better croped on the left more evenly cause I can't see why the extra green is there) |
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06/07/2003 06:50:31 PM |
| i like the angle on this..makes her hair look crazy, and like she's screaming at something coming from the sky. :) |
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06/07/2003 03:12:24 PM |
| Very interesting composition and point of view... I like it... this is a fun photo... I also like the DOF. Nice job... |
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06/07/2003 08:55:30 AM |
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06/07/2003 01:10:56 AM |
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06/06/2003 04:42:52 PM |
| This is fun. I like how her hair is sticking out and the look on her face. 8 |
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06/06/2003 06:26:44 AM |
| Þessi er eitthvað svo Íslensk? :O) góð mynd 8 |
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06/05/2003 06:08:00 PM |
| Excellent, she is gorgeous! I do know this face don't I? - 10, Gary. |
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06/05/2003 04:46:20 PM |
| Great shot! Perfect composition and it captures the challenge so well! |
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06/05/2003 02:40:48 PM |
| Great use of the "from above" setup. |
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06/05/2003 09:21:54 AM |
| I wonder if she'd cupped her hands around her mouth if it would have been even more apparant that she's screaming. Neat shot though. |
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06/04/2003 03:47:20 PM |
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06/04/2003 02:25:01 PM |
| Reminds me of dsidwell's From Above winner - an excellent capture of emotion, nice lighting, and interesting personality - someone I wish I knew! 8 |
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06/04/2003 01:41:25 PM |
| I light the way the screamer is arranged certainly fits the siund challenge 9 |
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06/03/2003 10:57:02 PM |
| This one made me laugh....good job! |
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06/03/2003 05:29:23 PM |
| If that ain't SOUND......lol |
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06/02/2003 11:47:24 PM |
| LOL, what a great shot. This is very cool, with the perfect focus on the face and excellent, neutral background. Great perspective on the subject also. 8. |
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06/02/2003 04:28:31 PM |
This is the one for me - excellent - top marks
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06/02/2003 04:23:59 PM |
| Good angle! She looks amused -- I would have guessed laughing or playful yelling if not for the title, although I suppose one can have a playful scream -- but that's fine, it still evokes the concept of sound. |
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06/02/2003 03:04:56 PM |
| Is she actually screaming? Unfortunately it doesn't look like it, just like she's posing open-mouthed for the photographer. |
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06/02/2003 09:57:51 AM |
| Very good lighting, composition and color. |
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06/02/2003 09:35:04 AM |
| 10 for concept, 8 for execution: 9 overall. :-> A little more softness in the contrast/lighting might well have pumped it a bit higher, but still, very good. I hear the photo (which is my major grading criteria for this contest), and it's an appealing image overall. It seems a little burnt out/overexposed on her face. This was something I'd thought to do, but I couldn't find anyone willing to scream for me on camera, so I had to go with something else! Good DOF. |
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06/02/2003 06:55:39 AM |
| A different view, nice photo |
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06/02/2003 04:22:48 AM |
| And at the top of her lungs it would seem! |
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06/02/2003 02:49:15 AM |
| I think i've seen this model before. i believe it was a norwegian, no? scandinavian? well, this is a nice photo even if im wrong. interesting perspective and pose. i am curious about what she is screaming about. cat stuck in a tree about to fall??? |
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06/02/2003 12:17:33 AM |
| man this is great! love the dof and her expression--and especially the angle. nice work. |
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