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05/27/2003 11:38:49 PM |
*Critique Club*
This is a very nice shot. When it was loading (top to bottom) what I saw first was a turquoise color, but when it loaded all the way, it's definately green.
What I like most about this shot is curved lines on top of the vertical lines. I think that is very nice. I like the way that the straight lines meet the curved ones. That is very visually appealing to me.
Focus and clarity are really good. You have captured the detail in the top of the hut and the texture in the wood as well.
At first glance, I thought that the lighting might be a little harsh, creating some reflection on the glossy wood, however, that doesn't really appear to be the case. It's shiny, but not distracting at all.
I like the angle and framing/cropping you chose as well. The way that the vertival lines are nice and vertical, and the way that the curved wave goes across the photo works very nicely. I like how the subject fills the entire frame of the photo.
I really wish I could offer more in the way of improvement, however, I don't think this really needs any improvement. I like it just as it is. Not very often I get to say that. Congrats.
~Heather~ |
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05/25/2003 07:12:47 AM |
Have come back to this shot from just browsing around the site: really like it now, much more than I did at the time of voting. Two contrasts going on, betweeen the shades of green and the textures, and both excellently brought out. I'd guess it didn't score better because you only used one colour, but I'm not that much of an expert on the dpchallenge communal mindset. Now if those darker panels had been orange ... :)
Ed |
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05/21/2003 12:16:15 AM |
I'm sorry to see this one didn't get better votes...
It's a picture I would be very proud of. |
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05/20/2003 01:21:57 AM |
Well done. I had a hunch you were hiding ice cream in that hut. Hit the hut to remove the hut\'s hidey-hole and pull out the soft, sweet icy treats buried beneath.
It looks like a fence, with a hat. |
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05/19/2003 05:38:04 PM |
| Vibrant use of color, nice abstract view on this challenge. |
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05/19/2003 02:10:28 AM |
| I like this shot. Probably won't do as well as it should! Hopefully it will. |
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05/18/2003 03:21:54 PM |
| Nice composition and contrasting textures. Well spotted. |
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05/17/2003 12:49:37 PM |
| Excellent. The contrast between the gloss paint and the material is especially striking. |
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05/17/2003 10:27:51 AM |
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05/16/2003 05:25:59 PM |
nice.......... but the colours are slightly washed out at the bottom...
(edit) after looking at it on another computer screen.... i have changed my mind... the colours are fine... gone from 4 to 7... |
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05/16/2003 10:53:27 AM |
| this is a 10! great study of green... |
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05/16/2003 06:19:45 AM |
| Good shot, I really like the wave and the shades of green. |
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05/16/2003 12:28:55 AM |
| Great range of green - such a dynamic color. The use of shape is strong. |
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05/15/2003 07:33:44 PM |
| Ice cream hut? I never would have thought of painting one shades of green. Very nice photo, clear, attractive, good colours. I like the little rounded corner on the black frame. ~10 |
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05/15/2003 03:50:38 AM |
| Wonderful color mix, those greens tones really hit home - 10. |
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05/14/2003 02:53:21 PM |
| great colors texture pattern light focus. A perfect 10 for me (and I don't give many). Hope this does well. |
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05/14/2003 02:18:36 PM |
| Nice image. But shouldnt all the secondary colors be included in this image? Anyway. . . i like the range of green that is incorporated into the image. I also like the way the different textures display the color. |
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05/14/2003 01:56:30 PM |
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05/14/2003 08:41:56 AM |
| this is a great macro - greenish colors, nice textures and combination of straight lines and curves really make green very interesting - 10 |
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