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30 years of collecting baseball cards
30 years of collecting baseball cards
scsher29


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Affluence (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Olympus D-580Z / X-400
Location: indoors
Date: Aug 2, 2005
Aperture: F3.5
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/4.0 sec
Galleries: Digital Art
Date Uploaded: Aug 2, 2005

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Statistics
Place: 166 out of 232
Avg (all users): 4.4932
Avg (commenters): 4.8571
Avg (participants): 4.3500
Avg (non-participants): 4.5663
Views since voting: 675
Views during voting: 378
Votes: 296
Comments: 8
Favorites: 0


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08/15/2005 10:23:19 PM
* Greetings from Critique Club *

First of all, let me say that I remember this shot from the Affluence Challenge. I thought at the time that it was a unique perspective on the theme, yet certainly a plausible one.

Composition
I think that the composition comes across as cluttered - even though I understand that the intent was probably meant to be a "pile" of baseball cards. I say this because 1) the image is too small - you should always try to take advantage of the entire 640 pixel range, 2) because of the size, you don't have as much space within which to work & show your subject, and 3) the cards that are in the main portion of the image are not displaying appealing or enlightening sections of them. Just feet are showing in one, faces are covered, etc. By setting up the shot a little (and retaining the "cluttered" feel), I think you could pump up the viewers' interest. For example, having a more recognizable name in full view on top (not being a huge baseball fan, but still having a lifelong love/hate relationship with it, I don't recognize any of the players showing).

Color/Lighting
I think the sepia tones work well. The lighting is okay, but it looks like you could take more advantage of it with some more contrast & reduced backlighting (function) to bring out crisper details.

Focus
Not as good as I think it should be given the complexity of the subject. It appears grainy - and while this can be used artistically to establish an "antique" feel (especially with sepia tones), I don't think it works here.

Overall
I think you were probably penalized by many voters because they did not "immediately" relate baseball cards to affluence. It's easy to think - oh yeah, they come with bubble gum for $0.xx. Again, not to say that this doesn't meet the challenge guidelines, because I think it does. But if you want to have a higher scoring shot (some people do, some don't), then you want to make the subject matter correlate easily to the challenge topic with the majority of the viewers. The shot is okay, but I think with a little more work it could be much better.

Just my 2 cents...
 Comments Made During the Challenge
08/09/2005 08:22:57 PM
There could be a small fortune here. Nice capture.
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08/09/2005 10:16:17 AM
hard to take an interesting photo of 2d objects - maybe more dramatic lighting with a baseball and the handle of a bat in the frame? Just a thought, for what it's worth
  Photographer found comment helpful.
08/08/2005 11:27:39 PM
A little bit more sharpness would make this picture better. Nice use of sepia
  Photographer found comment helpful.
08/06/2005 01:29:19 PM
Bumping up.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
08/05/2005 10:12:49 AM
It's a little out of focus, was intentional?
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08/03/2005 10:48:39 PM
This works well in sepia
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08/03/2005 12:40:04 AM
To the disinterested observer, there doesn't seem to be a direct link to the challenge theme.
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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