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Lounging on the Boat
Lounging on the Boat
thsulliv


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Family (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Canon EOS-300D Rebel
Lens: Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6
Location: Lake Travis, TX near Johnny Fin's
Date: Jul 4, 2005
Aperture: f6.3
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/80
Galleries: Family, Water
Date Uploaded: Jul 5, 2005

Waiting for the fireworks to start.

Statistics
Place: 116 out of 159
Avg (all users): 4.8792
Avg (commenters): 5.2222
Avg (participants): 4.8353
Avg (non-participants): 4.9032
Views since voting: 675
Views during voting: 415
Votes: 240
Comments: 10
Favorites: 0


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/16/2005 03:44:42 PM
okay here is an example of leading lines that don't work - all the lines point to Mom's crotch. Look, both of moms arms, and her legs, the line of the towel, the line of daughters arm, I can't help but think she's be happier if you cropped off her legs and feet, or if someone had pulled down the towel. Otherwise a great family portrait.
07/14/2005 02:08:57 PM
Feels like a bit too much of a snapshot, and the lighting is a little harsh on the background
07/12/2005 01:41:03 AM
nice candid ... but it is not eyecandy enough for this site. i say this not in a bad way but for you to know if and why you get marked down. i love the pic simply because this is what real families do.
07/11/2005 09:50:15 PM
Nice and unposed. I'll elaborate now that I take a second look. The colors are nice and not overdone. The skintones are quite natural. It's not the greatest shot on earth, but it has such a nice warm fuzzy feel and definitely speaks family. Thanks for the smile.
07/11/2005 04:37:07 PM
I think more upper background and less couch would make this one even better
07/11/2005 03:01:55 PM
Perfect subject for this challenge. Good lookin' crew.
07/11/2005 02:33:20 PM
I realize it is probably mom, daughter, son(?) BUT I just don't get family from the shot. Looks very posed and non-spontaneous which I think takes away from what i believe to be your intent with the shot. The foreground is good but the bright water I find distracting. Makes me want to look lower in the shot which only leaves feet as a focal point.
07/11/2005 01:11:33 PM
This looks fun;-) I would love travelling on a boat like this;-) Relaxed schene and express the family athmosphere.
07/11/2005 06:41:53 AM
Wow, can I chill too. They make it look so relaxing and nice. Nice capture
07/11/2005 03:52:32 AM
nice snap


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