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05/07/2003 03:01:15 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil
Composition - I think this is a good image, but there are a couple things that I think would've helped you score a little better. Firstly I will say that the idea is very good and I think the picture as a whole works. The first picture has a pretty light colored background with the clouds. I would rather have seen that be a little less clouded as I think it would provide a little more contrast with the angel and been a little more consistent with the right angel. The center pic could also use a little more contrast with the background. The third one is good as is I think because his head is a little darker than the left one so he has enough contrast.
Technical - All well taken photos. The other thing that I think would've made this score better is that the pictures are so small and the black area around it is really large and heavy. The details would've shown up much better if the individual pictures were all substantially bigger with the title down at the bottom and thinner lines between the photos.
Overall - Well done as it is, but I think some slight changes could have made significant improvement to your score, not that you did poorly by any means. Bringing the figures closer to the viewers makes the photos that much more poignant and emotive. I would understand more if the photos were small to show insignificance or some other characteristic associated with that, but I don't believe these figures or the cross are meant to show insignificance by any means. Well I hope that helps some. Great pic and keep shooting. Good luck in future challenges. - Bob
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05/05/2003 02:54:06 AM |
| Hi Sher, I never got around to commenting on this. You did a very good job, you really are improving! Beautiful pic. |
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05/04/2003 05:16:52 PM |
| excellent composition... black and white was a good choice... the perspective on the cross is also excellent... the celtic knots detail shows nicely :) - setzler |
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05/02/2003 01:26:18 AM |
| Nice work! I think "awaits" needs a noun to act upon, so "Heaven Waits" may be more appropriate. But that's from grading all of my student papers this semester. the tones and contrasts here work well, and I like how the frames added together make synergy. |
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05/01/2003 12:51:23 PM |
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04/30/2003 08:44:11 PM |
| I like how you did this. The 3 photos go well together and are unique. |
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04/30/2003 06:26:36 PM |
| Nicely arranged, and generally purple is a spiritual color. The angel on our right is a hair too dark on the face. Nothing major though. :-) The clouds are beautiful. Black and white was a good choice here. High score. |
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04/29/2003 11:08:48 AM |
| beautiful b&w's and great perspective. i love the clouds in the 2nd and 3rd images...too bad that first statue wasn't positioned properly to catch the cloud light the same way. Nice job! |
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04/28/2003 08:35:35 PM |
looks like a postcard from . . . ? ;-)
nice b&w, good alignment. |
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04/28/2003 05:30:12 PM |
| Angel on the left seems somewhat out of focus. Great cross and contrast. |
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04/28/2003 01:36:18 PM |
| Nice. I would have used larger photos however. |
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04/28/2003 01:01:20 PM |
| Lovely images, especially with that regal, cloudy sky in the background. Your choice of font and color for the script really adds a delicate air to this. |
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04/28/2003 11:52:42 AM |
| Nice layout, looks good in B.W. Interesting viewpoint on the central image. |
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04/28/2003 10:40:12 AM |
| I love the mood in this. You have brought the spiritual feel to this. The clouds and tones work nicely together. Good work! |
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04/28/2003 10:11:13 AM |
| Very nice! The lighting is consistent in all three shots and it's nice and clear. |
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