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05/13/2003 09:32:20 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club :)
I like the composition of the shot. The boat and reflection together is a presentation I know I would be partial to as well. The sun on the water does make the shot a little over exposed and too bright above the boat.
I think an off center presentation of the boat probably would have moved this image more toward art and a little away from "snapshot" as far a composition goes.
The focus is great. I like the detailing on the sail and the clear ripples in the water.
Overall I would say that this is a great shot. A little adjustment to the brightness and a minor shift in composition would improve it.
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05/07/2003 07:54:03 AM |
This was my first photo entry. So I am very very pleased. I just wish I would have made the boat off center. Didn't really think about it until after the comments....
Thanks all...
Message edited by author 2004-11-18 21:43:09. |
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05/06/2003 09:10:15 PM |
| I think this is an excellent black and white, but I don't particularly care for the centered composition as much as I might if it was off center somewhat... |
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05/06/2003 09:03:27 PM |
| I like this shot, although the whites are a bit blown out. Love the idea though! Also it is needing a straighten. |
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05/06/2003 01:57:35 PM |
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05/06/2003 10:15:36 AM |
| i really like your work here, i like the light on the water and i like the black and white. good job |
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05/05/2003 02:06:07 PM |
| nice job in this picture nice job on the clarity in the picture. very nice work |
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05/02/2003 10:29:05 PM |
| nice capture. the surface of the water looks awesome! i looks like the horizon is at a slight angle and mabye could have benefited from some slight rotation, but that's jus a nit. great shot. |
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05/02/2003 08:01:57 PM |
| Wow this is cool. Great job |
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05/02/2003 01:55:20 PM |
| Do you need the horizon line at all?? |
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05/02/2003 08:05:06 AM |
| Nice composition. I really like the shadow of the boat. It makes it look like a fin carving through the water. Great work! |
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04/30/2003 10:27:23 PM |
| striking image - my only very small wish is that the boat had been a tad off center |
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04/30/2003 09:53:48 PM |
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04/30/2003 09:32:07 PM |
| Did you rent a helicopter to get this one :o) the shadow from the sail is good 9pt... |
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04/30/2003 07:21:24 PM |
| nice b&w beautiful light, the wake gives a nice sense of movement |
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04/30/2003 02:09:49 PM |
| This one looks rather fuzzy to me. But it's a nice composition nonetheless. - 5 |
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04/30/2003 12:02:50 PM |
| great picture, but do feel it would have been improved by the rule of thirds, and getting to sea level (am aware of the difficulties in doing this). |
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04/30/2003 01:32:38 AM |
| I'm going to bet this doesn't do so well on DPC - but I love it. 9. |
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