Although I find this a great concept, it seems to me to be compositionally weak. Looks very random and not thought out to me. I think this could be a great image, with maybe some s curves or something more stimulating.
Yikes, with landmarks like that you'll be lucky to end up in the right state/country. Interesting take on the challenge, I like the abstract nature but I wish there was something a bit more.. I don't know.. solid to the image to anchor it a bit. I realize its showing something alcohol induced but I think if you had something solid to counter-balance the floating squiggles it might enhance the intoxicated look to the image. With an image like this I also think a simple black border might tie it all together, my eyes tend to wander out of the picture as I follow the squiggles up and to the right. Interesting. 4.