This is a great concept but the static composition doesn't really move me. Perhaps a different perspective/angle would make a stronger presentation of this good idea?
you are probably not going to get the credit you deserve for this shot, but from me to you. Great shot. Ive just found with previous experience that DP voters are a bit shallow, and the distracting subject matter that looks much polluted will probably take its toll on your final score. Rebel me (ha ha) thats the part I like. GL.