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Challenge: Fauna (Classic Editing)
Camera: Nikon D100
Location: Tracy Aviary
Date: Apr 16, 2003
Galleries: Fashion, Animals
Date Uploaded: Apr 17, 2003

Full Framed Crowned Crane.

Statistics
Place: 10 out of 313
Avg (all users): 6.9960
Avg (commenters): 8.1000
Avg (participants): 7.0132
Avg (non-participants): 6.9688
Views since voting: 2208
Votes: 247
Comments: 27
Favorites: 3 (view)


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05/04/2003 11:01:27 PM
Greetings fromt the Critique Club
Nice to meet ya, Jubei.

Composition
I love the crop on this - I love the crop because it takes up the full side of the frame. That's a great choice. I wouldn't have even minded a bit more off the right to complete the design.

Focus
Your DoF is super! I noticed you eliminated the fence, and at the same time blurred a perfect green and brown background. Unfortunately you blurred some of the crown and feathers on the back of her neck, but again, not sure it's controllable.

Lighting
What time of day was this shot? I would have liked it just a little less harsh in the lighting, but this is critique for the sake of critique. I love the shot too much to know what I DON'T like!

Overall
I hope you're extremely pleased with your 7! :) I've never had a shot so high or so perfect. You should be happy with this - and keep shooting!

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05/02/2003 03:16:15 PM
I can't believe no one could tell that the shadows are actually an out of focus fence between you and the subject! Or maybe, I'm just really wrong, that's what it looks like to me. Nice shot otherwise though.
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05/01/2003 12:23:40 AM
Congratulations on your great score and a top ten, Jeremy! Woohoo!
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04/30/2003 12:09:40 AM
Well Jubei, i feel you deserve a ribbon more than that other shot (although i gave 10s to both) as technically this is far by the more demanding of the two shots and imho the more sophisticated.. I read some comments here about the shadows; didn't bother me at all, just loved the detail on the beak. Anyway, still a good score and a great picture (which is the most important).
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/29/2003 02:02:24 PM
Nice crisp clear image.I also like how you got very close to the animal
04/29/2003 07:10:18 AM
Great Shot. Good lighting and colors pop out beautifully. Awesome job
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04/27/2003 10:49:39 AM
Wow, very sharp! The feathers on the bird's head along with their shadows really make this image pop! Great shot.
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04/26/2003 08:07:43 AM
Pretty cool image - Great job
04/26/2003 07:56:43 AM
The shadows comin on the eye bother me a bit... otherwise very nice indeed. - 8
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04/25/2003 03:34:20 PM
Good shot - love the way the it draws you to the birds eye.
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04/25/2003 06:53:30 AM
Nice. A nit pick: the shadow of the crest spoils the detail on the bird's face. But still a nice shot.
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04/25/2003 01:24:32 AM
Perfect in every way, focus, composition, color and crop. 10
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04/24/2003 06:15:11 PM
phenomenal detal and great shallow depth of field... one of the best of the week :) - setzler
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04/24/2003 05:23:43 PM
Nice picture. Perfect colors and sharpness. I like it much!
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04/24/2003 12:53:21 PM
Very nice. Like how you use dof 9.
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04/24/2003 01:28:38 AM
Nice tight crop you have chosen. It works! This is a top quality photo which you really have to sell as a print!
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04/23/2003 08:44:01 PM
Nice photo!
04/23/2003 06:33:51 PM
very nice. i like the composition.
04/23/2003 05:00:16 PM
Very sharp focus and color. Good shot.
04/23/2003 03:54:11 PM
Wonderful shadows of the feathers on the head - great angle of light!
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04/23/2003 12:32:47 PM
Beautiful shot.
04/23/2003 12:03:03 PM
Nice sharp image. Good use of depth of field. Good job!
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04/23/2003 11:48:02 AM
Nice bird, Nice focus, just nice!
04/23/2003 10:09:22 AM
very well balance and focus good and light good
i like
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04/23/2003 09:24:16 AM
love this one too
04/23/2003 01:38:33 AM
Good choice for cropping -- most would keep the entire crown in, but this way works better.
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04/23/2003 12:54:10 AM
This is just beautiful. The definition is outstanding. I really love the reflections of his feathers on his face, particularly through his eye! Great definition on his beak. It makes this image so alive.Love the blurred background and its color. Good photographic eye and a good camera! Gosh, what a handsome guy. You know, i still have over 300 pics to vote on but i lingered a long time looking at this image. 10 Journey. May i pat him?
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