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06/13/2005 02:25:35 PM |
* Greetings from the Critique Club *
First of all, let me say I remember this image from the Decisions Challenge (fondly). I think you really used B/W to your advantage and the softness and clarity of the image are great. I think you could crop out a little more of the upper left and/or process it a little more (reduce backlighting, play with contrast, etc.) - there seems to be a bit of glare on the fabric there.
The composition is good, but I think could be improved even more by perhaps expanding the crop to the bottom & right. Don't get me wrong - it's a nice rock & should be shown off. I just think that you might accent it more by slightly increasing the size of your crop in that direction.
Very nice shot.
Just my 2 cents...
Jimmy
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06/03/2005 09:56:02 AM |
| I don't feel that the image conveys instantly recognizable decision. The wedding ring does tell us that a decision has been made, but It's not easy to say that that is true. Rather a better photo in 'my opinion' would have been the bride and groom slipping the rings on their hands... a close up of the hands slipping the rings on, because it denotes the 'action' of deciding to commit forever. Because making a decision is an action, I think the photos should denote action. |
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06/02/2005 08:45:57 PM |
| I almost shot one like this, but changed my mind because I couldn't get the light right. You did a good job of lighting, and the tulle sleeve adds great texture to the subject. Thanks for showing me the way I should have shot mine. |
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06/01/2005 02:01:58 PM |
| Decision was made already right... |
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06/01/2005 08:42:18 AM |
I am not considering titles in this challenge and looking for images that meet the challenge description visually....
Meets challenge description............5
technical..........4
Artistic....................4
Average......4 |
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