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04/19/2003 08:55:37 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil
Composition - Not lacking in color at all whatsoever. This is really bright and really unique. Very interesting subject. I wish you didn't cut the top of it off. I have no idea what it is. I'm guessing some kind of stapler. I don't know what else this company makes. I'm not really sold on the motion blur, but it does give this picture a little bit of life. I'd say it probably helps slightly more than it distracts. You probably should have some paper if you're showing a stapler.
Technical - Well portrayed colors. Exposure is very good. Could be a little clearer, but overall pretty well taken. I wish it wasn't framed in quite so tight.
Overall - I think its a pretty well taken photo. Subject is a little odd and I think a lot of us didn't know what it was. I wasn't sure at first. In all honesty it isn't the most compelling subject either. Well good luck in future challenges - Inspzil |
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04/12/2003 11:36:40 AM |
| Nice colors. I wish I could make out what it is. A stapler I suppose. |
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04/11/2003 01:17:09 AM |
| nice efect with the moving paper. |
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04/09/2003 05:08:47 PM |
| I think an up close macro of the machanics inside would be more effective. That's where all of the color comes from anyway. |
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04/09/2003 04:55:02 AM |
| The moving paper distracts from this rather colourful stapler. |
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04/08/2003 11:29:12 PM |
| Very fun shot! Nice idea. Very colorful and well executed. |
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04/08/2003 11:20:28 PM |
| Nice color, good focus, lighting is just fine, don't understand why you cropped the top off like you did. |
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04/08/2003 10:49:09 PM |
| I think the colors may have been pushed a little too much. Nice composition though |
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04/08/2003 02:26:41 PM |
| nice idea nice use of color |
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04/08/2003 02:10:36 PM |
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04/07/2003 01:10:54 PM |
| great blending effect. :) |
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04/07/2003 01:00:40 PM |
| this is a good idea, original, nice work |
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