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Tides Out
Tides Out
kirtiebu


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Challenge: Extreme Action (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix S5000 Z
Location: Hervey Bay, Queensland.
Date: Apr 10, 2005
Galleries: Nature, Water
Date Uploaded: Apr 10, 2005

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Neat image

Statistics
Place: 104 out of 132
Avg (all users): 4.8543
Avg (commenters): 5.2500
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Views since voting: 621
Views during voting: 381
Votes: 254
Comments: 5
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04/20/2005 11:31:22 AM
Although this photo depicts action it feels somewhat static to me because of the front and center positioning of the subject and the angle for which the shot was taken. The movement of the skier could have been improved by capturing him either farther out in the frame or by cropping.

If you had crouched a little lower you might have been able to get more height to the spray from his turn.

Additionally, I think this photo would be more interesting if the primary subject were in the top 2/3 of the photo. There's a bit too much sky and empty space in the photo which I find distracting.

All the best,

Christina Mallet
(DP Critique Club)

 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/17/2005 04:25:13 PM
I think a closer crop would have helped this shot
i like it though
6
good luck
  Photographer found comment helpful.
04/13/2005 03:53:33 PM
If your subject had been on the right of the frame with a little more of a hint of what was holding him up on the left the shot would have a lot more of a dynamic feel.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
04/12/2005 11:56:26 PM
Good capture.. more zoom/tighter crop would've helped.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
04/11/2005 03:17:20 PM
If the shot was more shapr and cropped more tight, it would be much stronger
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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