this shot is amazing and was an instant fave the second i saw it. The composition, the pose... and of course this unsavory juxtaposition of subjects. Stellar
Personally, I think this one is much better then the one you actually entered to the cemetery challenge.
This one is much more dramatic. That pose of the woman is so tempting, but she's nothing then a shadow.
Those crosses look threatening but the sky look stronger.
The only thing that lowers this to a second place IMO is the wall on the left. It doesn't leave any escape.